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French - A Past Holiday

  • Essay length: 580 words
  • Submitted: 05/07/2009
  • Marked by teacher: (?) Sarah Benson
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GCSE French

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This is a 5 star piece of work and is more like the standard required at AS Level than GCSE. It is very well written, flows well and uses a good selection of verbs and topic-specific vocabulary. There are many examples of complex structures, different tenses and opinions.

Marked by teacher Sarah Benson 04/04/2013

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Les Vacances Dernières

Quand j'étais petit, j'allais au bord de la mer chaque année avec ma famille. En outre, quelquefois nous visitions des villes aussi. Je ne l'ai jamais aimé et je préférais jouer à la plage ou nager dans la mer. Maintenant, parce que je suis plus agê, je vais aussi en vacances avec mes amis. Les grandes vacances dernières, avant que j'allasse en vacances avec ma famille, je suis allé au nord du pays de Galles pour une semaine pour faire du camping avec mes amis. J'aurais préféré aller pour deux semaines, mais il n'y avait pas assez de temps. J'adore le camping et je le fais souvent.

Mes amis et moi, nous sommes allés au pays de Galles en autobus. Le voyage, c'était nul car il nous a fallu cinq heures pour arriver là-bas à cause des travaux. En voyagant, nous avons joué aux cartes pour passer le temps. Quand nous sommes arrivés, tout le monde était fatigué.

Pendant la semaine, il faisait chaud et il y avait du soleil tous les jours. C'était heureusement parce que nous dormions sous la tente. Mes amis et moi, nous nagions et nous nous

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This is a 5 star piece of work and is more like the standard required at AS Level than GCSE. It is very well written, flows well and uses a good selection of verbs and topic-specific vocabulary. There are many examples of complex structures, different tenses and opinions.

Marked by teacher Sarah Benson 04/04/2013

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