French Oral. - Introducing Myself

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French Oral. J'mappelle Mike Bryant, J'ai quatorze ans et J'habite a Aylebury dans le Buckinghamshire. Mon Anniversaire c'est le cinq juillet. Je suis Anglais mais je habitais en Allemagne pendant deux ans. Je suis tout grand et j'ai un grand nez, et les yeux bruns, et de grandes oreilles.


Le weekend dernier, je suis alle a un grand concert a Londres avec mes amis, c'etait stupefiant! Le weekend prochain j'irai beaucoup a un concert mai cest tres grand et cest a Milton Keynes. J'ai un frere, il s'appelle Dominic et il a dix ans.


- Q - Pourquoi aimes-tu le punk-rock et le hard rock? - A - Parce qu'il est significantif et emotif. - Q - Pourquoi aimes-tu aller aux concerts? - A - Parce qu'ils sont passionnat et amusant. - Q - Pourquoi aimes-tu Andy? - A - Parce que nous sommes tres proches et nous sont amusons bien. - Q - Pourquoi est-il important d'etre individual? - A - Parce que - - - -

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3 star(s)

This is a 3 star piece of work. It has some variety of sentence structures, some good adjectives, and 4 different tenses (some very briefly.) Some conjunctions are used to link sentences together. However there are a few spelling and grammar mistakes. In order to improve this piece of work, the writer could add more opinions and reasons, different conjunctions to link sentences together, and more details about hobbies, family etc. Also, adding more detail about the concert in the past and future tenses would make the speaking exam longer and prove to the examiner that the candidate has a good understanding of French grammar. It needs to be between 4 and 6 minutes long.

Marked by teacher Sarah Benson 28/03/2013

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