• Join over 1.2 million students every month
  • Accelerate your learning by 29%
  • Unlimited access from just £6.99 per month

French Oral. - Introducing Myself

  • Essay length: 294 words
  • Submitted: 11/07/2002
  • Marked by teacher: (?) Sarah Benson
Share this essay:

Do not show me this again

Are you in the right place?

Jump to French and see how teachers think you should prepare in:

GCSE French

Teacher essay summary

3 star(s)

This is a 3 star piece of work. It has some variety of sentence structures, some good adjectives, and 4 different tenses (some very briefly.) Some conjunctions are used to link sentences together. However there are a few spelling and grammar mistakes. In order to improve this piece of work, the writer could add more opinions and reasons, different conjunctions to link sentences together, and more details about hobbies, family etc. Also, adding more detail about the concert in the past and future tenses would make the speaking exam longer and prove to the examiner that the candidate has a good understanding of French grammar. It needs to be between 4 and 6 minutes long.

Marked by teacher Sarah Benson 28/03/2013

The first 200 words of this essay...

French Oral.

J'mappelle Mike Bryant, J'ai quatorze ans et J'habite a Aylebury dans le Buckinghamshire. Mon Anniversaire c'est le cinq juillet. Je suis Anglais mais je habitais en Allemagne pendant deux ans.

Je suis tout grand et j'ai un grand nez, et les yeux bruns, et de grandes oreilles. J'ai les cheveux blonds et mi-longs.

Je suis tres drole, courageux, tres fort, honnete et mur; mais je suis un peu agressif aussi je suis tres rebelled. Enfin, je suis independent, c'est tres important pour moi.

J'ecoute beaucoup la musique, j'adore le punk rock et le hard rock. Le weekend dernier, je suis alle a un grand concert a Londres avec mes amis, c'etait stupefiant!

Le weekend prochain j'irai beaucoup a un concert mai cest tres grand et cest a Milton Keynes.

J'ai un frere, il s'appelle Dominic et il a dix ans. Il est tres difficile mais il est amusant.

Mon meilleur ami s'appelle Andy. Il a dix-six ans. Il est grand et il a un tres grand nez, et de petites oreilles, et les yeux gris, Il a les cheveux bruns

Read more
The above preview is unformatted text

Found what you're looking for?

  • Start learning 29% faster today
  • Over 150,000 essays available
  • Just £6.99 a month

  • "
    Great help! A Service that allows you to look at other peoples work, which can give you ideas on how to set things out and what to include in your own work.
    "
    Zoey. University Student.
  • "
    Certainly, the advantage of being able to see such a vast collection of examplars which comes with being a member of Markedbyteachers.com is astounding.
    "
    Telim Dars. Chemistry, Physics and English Literature. A Level Student.

MbT essay summary

This is a 3 star piece of work. It has some variety of sentence structures, some good adjectives, and 4 different tenses (some very briefly.) Some conjunctions are used to link sentences together. However there are a few spelling and grammar mistakes. In order to improve this piece of work, the writer could add more opinions and reasons, different conjunctions to link sentences together, and more details about hobbies, family etc. Also, adding more detail about the concert in the past and future tenses would make the speaking exam longer and prove to the examiner that the candidate has a good understanding of French grammar. It needs to be between 4 and 6 minutes long.

Marked by teacher Sarah Benson 28/03/2013

Marked by a teacher

This essay has been marked by one of our great teachers. You can read the full teachers notes when you download the essay.

Peer reviewed

This essay has been reviewed by one of our specialist student essay reviewing squad. Read the full review on the essay page.

Peer reviewed

This essay has been reviewed by one of our specialist student essay reviewing squad. Read the full review under the essay preview on this page.

Do not show me this again

Are you in the right place?

Jump to French and see how teachers think you should prepare in: