Good conclusions usually refer back to the question or title and address it directly - for example by using key words from the title.
How well do you think these conclusions address the title or question? Answering these questions should help you find out.
- Do they use key words from the title or question?
- Do they answer the question directly?
- Can you work out the question or title just by reading the conclusion?
"For Muslims, fasting has both advantages and disadvantages" - discuss in relation to Ramadan
"In conclusion, I believe that Ramadan has a major effect on the lives of Muslims for both negative and positive reasons. However, it is clear to me that the positive aspects far out weight the negative aspects. Therefore it is my belief that Ramadan is very beneficial and a life enriching expereience for Muslims.
To what extent were the builders of the Erechtheion successful in solving the problems caused by the site and position of the temple?
"conclusion, whether the builders of the Erechtheion were successful in
solving the problems caused by the site and the position. In order to
do this, I will be using evidence such as illustrations, ground plans
and different viewpoints of the Erechtheion. I will analysis the
Erechtheion through the individual elevations. A comparison of the
Erechtheion and a regular hexastyle temple will be an imperative
feature when dealing with the abnormalities and potential problems of
the Erechtheion. Throughout this essay"
Compare and contrast the iconography and mythology of at least two major Hindu deities.
"With many people being unable to read during and around the Puranic period, the iconography became of vast importance. People relied on the pictures to tell them the stories of the gods and that is a large reason why each aspect of the icon represents something different, to tell the story of the god. For example, Vishnu's lotus he holds symbolises his purity and the fire Shiva encircles is representing the life cycle of the universe. However, this essay does not attempt to deny the importance of the scriptures, as without them, the pictures are merely pictures and not visions of spirituality. In conclusion, although this essay has looked at Vishnu and Shiva individually as separate deities, the focus must be left on them as one, for that is what they are, existing only with each other. The cycle of the universe relies on all of them, Brahma, Vishnu and Shiva, to continue for if one were to disappear, the chain of the creation, destruction and recreation of the world would be broken. "Germination creates the tree, destroys the seed and preserves the species; the joiner creates the table, destroys the tree and preserves the wood" (Larousse, 1965:211).