A biography of Stephen Hawking.

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1942 Stephen Hawking was born on January 8th in Oxford, England.
1956 Stephen decides to become a physicist.
1962 - Stephen graduated from Oxford University
        -He begins studies at Cambridge University
        -Stephen develops a disease
1965 - Stephen becomes a research fellow at Gonville and Caius College.
        - He marries Jane Wilde.
1966 Stephen receives his Ph.D. from Cambridge University.
1967 Stephen’s son Robert is born.
1970 Stephen’s daughter Lucy is born.
1979 - Stephen becomes a Professor of Mathematics at Cambridge
        - His son Timothy is born.
1985 Stephen gets pneumonia and loses his ability to speak forever.
1988 A Brief History of Time is published.
1990 Stephen and his wife Jane divorce.
1992 A Brief History of Time is made into a movie.
1995 Stephen marries his nurse, Elaine Mason.
2008 Stephen Hawking is still alive today.

Stephen Hawking Biography

Stephen Hawking was born on 1942 January 8th in Oxford, England. He was the oldest of 4 children in his family. His family lived in London in the 1950s When Stephen was only a little boy he loved things with moving parts and he loved to take things apart and see how they worked. When Stephen was just a kid he liked to build robot controlled boats and airplanes. Stephen was a very bright child, but he did not do very well in school. He didn’t learn to read until he was eight years old, his work was usually very messy and he hardly ever studied. At this age, he didn’t show many signs of future greatness.

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When Stephen Hawking was 14 he decided he wanted to specialize in Math and Physics. Later on Stephen decided to only specialize in physics, which he decided was more interesting. So, he applied at Oxford University when he was only seventeen years old. He did so well on the entry exam that he won a scholarship to study physics at Oxford. Stephen’s poor study habits didn’t change, in fact he only worked at his studies for about one hour a day. Fortunately for Stephen, he was very intelligent and managed to pass the final exam and received a degree in ...

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