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A black hole is a theorized celestial body whose surface gravity is so strong that no light can escape from within it. It is one of the three postulated final stages of stellar evolution wherein a star’s core cools and contracts and begins to collapse under the enormous weight of the outer layers. No black hole has ever been identified but scientists have described certain parts of the universe where they might exist.

A black hole is a theorized celestial body whose surface gravity is so strong that no light can escape from within it. Although black holes have been of intense scientific interest only in the later 20th century, the concept goes back to the French mathematician Pierre Simon de Laplace. In a 1798 treatise Laplace agreed with Isaac Newton that light is composed of particles. He reasoned that if enough mass were added to a star like the sun, the gravitational force of the star would eventually become so great that its escape velocity would equal the velocity of light. At that point, light particles would not be able to leave the surface of the star, and it would blink out and become an invisible black star.

More than a century later, Albert Einstein, in his special theory of relativity, maintained that nothing can move faster than light. This means that Laplace’s black stars are also black holes, because if light cannot escape, all other matter must be trapped as well. The surface of the black hole thus acts like a one-way membrane: material may fall into a black hole, but no information or energy can come out of a black hole. The detailed properties of black holes are studied by using Einstein’s general theory of relativity and gravitation.

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In 1917 a German astrophysicist, Karl Schwarzchild, used Einstein’s theory to calculate that if a star of any given mass were compressed to a size smaller than a critical radius, now called the Schwarzchild radius in his honor, the density would become so high and the gravitational force so great that the star would become a black hole. The spherical surface about the star at the Schwarzchild radius is called the event horizon. It marks the outer surface of the black hole at which the escape velocity just equals the velocity of light. Further calculations revealed to Schwarzchild that the ...

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