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Cloning
A group of genetically identical offspring produced by asexual reproduction is called a clone. The nucleus of every cell of an individual contains the genetic information needed to develop the entire organism. It is therefore possible under suitable conditions to produce a whole organism from a single cell. If a cell divides mitotically it will produce a clone. If each cell of the clone is separated and allowed to develop into the complete organism, a group of genetically identical offspring is formed. This is known as cloning. (2).
Two very different procedures have been referred to as "cloning":
- Embryo cloning has been successfully carried out for years on many species of animals. Some limited experimentation has been done on human embryos.
- Adult DNA cloning has been used to clone a sheep, but was not tried on humans until 1998-DEC (3)
Humans often think of themselves as being superior to other animals (not to mention plants, fungi, bacteria and so on) and therefore having the “right” to exploit other organisms for their own benefit. (1)
The cloning of the sheep, Dolly, in 1997 was an inevitable consequence of the progress being made in genetics and biotechnology. It raises the possibility of breeding many identical copies of animals including transgenic animals, showing desirable features. One of the ethical concerns is that the techniques could be applied to humans, although such work is currently banned. (1)
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