Gas Exchange
Gas exchange supplies oxygen for cellular respiration and disposes of carbon dioxide: an overview
Gas exchange is the uptake of molecular oxygen (O2) from the environment and the discharge of carbon dioxide (CO2) to the environment.
The source of oxygen, the respiratory medium, is air for terrestrial animals and water for aquatic animals.
The atmosphere is about 21% O2 (by volume).
Dissolved oxygen levels in lakes, oceans, and other bodies of water vary considerably, but they are always much less than an equivalent volume of air.
The part of an animal where gases are exchanged with the environment is the respiratory surface.
Movements of CO2 and O2 across the respiratory surface occurs entirely by diffusion.
The rate of diffusion is proportional to the surface area across which diffusion occurs, and inversely proportional to the square of the distance through which molecules must move.
Therefore, respiratory surfaces tend to be thin and have large areas, maximizing the rate of gas exchange.
In addition, the respiratory surface of terrestrial and aquatic animals are moist to maintain the cell membranes and thus gases must first dissolve in water.
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Punctuation, grammar and spelling done well. The format of the essay is all over the place with different sized bullet points and no subheadings for different sections and different sized font and text which is very untidy.
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An essay which covers gas exchange. The candidate starts with a well explained definition of oxygen in different animals, and provides a simple definition of oxygen in relation to the different mediums which is a great start. The candidate is wrong in thinking that only aquatic animals need a moist exchange surface, as mammals do as well. The candidate goes on to explain different respiratory adaptations well, but does not explain the different types of fish and how they adapted very well. They could also have included adaptations such as a respiratory swimbladder. They explain the adaptations of birds well.
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