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Vivien trac
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November 25, 2011
Genetic Engineering
Genetic engineering is the alternation or manipulation of genes to create the desire traits that does not occur naturally but is wanted in a specific plant or animal. These scientific processes usually increase further understanding of biodiversity and also bring about desirable and functional change. But the question is, are the effects of this new technology beneficial or harmful to human beings.
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Quality of writing
The front cover is designed well and looks professional. Major grammatical errors, for example 'to create the desire traits' should be ' to create the desired traits.' Quite a few sentences do not read very well although the scientific content is accurate. Spelling is generally fine, but punctuation needs work in places. For example the use of capital letters in the middle of sentences.
Level of analysis
The essay itself goes into a good depth of knowledge on the advantages and disadvantages of genetic engineering with a clear introduction and conclusion. The conclusion should not be 'I' but should be a generic conclusion bringing all the different threads of the argument into one solid conclusion that the candidate makes.
Response to question
The response to the question is well done and considers a range of different opinions and explains what genetic engineering is to a certain depth. However, the essay lacks flow due to the bad grammar that is used, and this detracts from the clarity of each paragraph and sentence.