Sean Tuffy
Electromagnetic Spectrum
The Electromagnetic Spectrum is a range of all the electromagnetic waves, these range from radio waves with the lowest frequency and the biggest wavelength to gamma rays with the highest frequency and the smallest wavelength.
The main eight categories of electromagnetic waves are:
1. Radio Waves 5.Ultraviolet
2. Microwave through far infrared 6.X - Rays
3. Near infrared 7.Gamma Rays
4. Visible 8.High Energy Gamma Rays
Most of these categories split into smaller subdivisions, for example visible waves split into different visible coloured waves.
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This piece of work is laid out clearly and the information is easy to follow, the candidates writing is coherent and they have used appropriate technical terms throughout their work which demonstrates a good understanding of the principles that they have discussed. In addition to this there are no errors with spelling or grammar.
Level of analysis
The candidate gives a brief description relating to each type of electromagnetic wave, while the information they provide is accurate they could have gone into more depth and discussed topics such as how each type of wave is formed and how they are detected etc. This additional information shows your interest in the subject and can make your work more enjoyable to read. Furthermore taking the time to research a topic and rewrite the information in your own words is a useful skill and one in which is necessarily for higher education. This essay could also have been improved had the candidate put together a conclusion, this helps to bring your work to a close and it gives you the chance to leave the reader with a good impression of your work. A good conclusion should summarise the key points from your essay, in this case that would include points such as the fact that all electromagnetic waves travel at the same speed and you could then go on to state similarities or differences between each type of wave. It is also important that you write a personal response, this could include what you have learnt from writing your essay or it could be why you think your essay is important, perhaps in this case you could discuss why it is beneficial to understand the different types of electromagnetic radiation.
Response to question
The candidate has written a strong response to this topic, they have clearly discussed each type of electromagnetic radiation and they mention physical properties and uses of each. Though I feel their introduction has some room for improvement, this is your chance to grab the readers attention and get them interested in what you have to say, which you can do quite easily by mentioning an interesting fact or quote that is relevant to your topic or my discussing background information. It is also useful to make it clear exactly what you plan to discuss so that the reader can immediately see what your work is going to be about.