The Memorable Trip

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The Memorable Trip

It was during the Summer Holidays, that my whole family decided to set off to visit my grandparents. I was enjoying myself there and on the second day, my granddad asked me to get ready because I was about to go on a memorable trip. He did not say where we were going, but I figured he was taking me on a shopping spree. But then I had these other thoughts. Maybe we were going on a road trip, or maybe we were going to visit my relatives, or maybe, just maybe, an exotic trip to the rainforest, a place I had always wanted to go.

Throughout the night, I couldn't sleep thinking, "What would this trip be?" The next morning, I woke up and heard a lot of noise in the kitchen. It was two of my cousins, I quickly said hello to them. I had overslept and no one bothered to wake me up. I then asked Kevin and Elaine if they were coming on the trip, and they said unexcitingly, "Yes, we are coming fishing!"

Fishing? I had never even thought of that. I was shocked but excited