The Pick Up

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The Pick Up

Darkness. All encompassing darkness. The moon is absent and not one star stains the sky. It's the night a late model Ford Fiesta refuses to continue its journey to the safety of it’s home. It's the night that the little car's life passes from this realm to automobile heaven on a long, dark stretch of desolate road. The driver curses violently as the lifeless automobile coasts to its final resting place onto what he hopes are the shoulder of the road. It's difficult for him to tell in the absolute pitch darkness. Hesitantly, he turns the ignition, praying that the engine had merely stalled. His hopes are shattered, as there is no response from under the hood. He tries the key again with more urgency, and yet still no signs of life. "It's dead Jim." He mutters to himself.

The driver, Derek Clancy, hits the steering wheel one final time in disgust. Derek, a former high school football star, lets out a string of curses before exiting his four-wheeled prison. "That's the last time I volunteer for anything." He growls remembering his offer to fill in for a co-worker whose wife was very pregnant at an out of town branch of the video rental chain that Derek is employed by. "Midnight in the middle of freaking nowhere..." kicking the Fiesta as he surveys his surroundings, running a hand through his sandy brown hair.

Leafless trees cast deeper shadows against the starless night sky. The twisted branches stab madly in all directions as if to flee some unseen terror lurking within the mist. An eerie silence hangs about the area, except for a few metallic pings from the cooling engine of the non-functional Fiesta. "A perfect backdrop for any horror movie." Derek says as he leans into the car to retrieve a flashlight. After a brief struggle to open the glove compartment, he pulls forth the flashlight as King Arthur would Excalibur. After a swift check of the batteries, Derek musters his courage and sets off in search of civilization.

As he walks, Derek averts his gaze from the woods surrounding him. He silently thinks himself for falling prey to paranoia. "Next thing you know some creep in a hockey mask is going to jump out at me." He chuckles. Time itself seems to have stilled in the darkness. From nowhere a blood-curdling screech pierces the silence as a huge, dark shape whizzes by Derek's ear. Immediately Derek drops to the ground, his heart pounding like a jackhammer. He clicks on his flashlight and scans in all directions, but nothing is to be found. After several moments of laboured breathing, Derek rises to his feet convincing himself that it was a large owl or another nocturnal animal. Yet, the feeling of something unnatural fools his senses. Realizing that he needs a distraction, he does the only natural thing he can think, he will have to push back his fears. He begins to sing to himself. Starting with the entire ‘Now 47’ album.

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Derek starts to cover the distance at a comfortable pace, time seeming to pass at a much steadier rate. During a wild air guitar solo of Eric Clapton’s, Derek suddenly finds himself bathed in bright light. Headlights, like the eyes of judgement, pull ever closer. Derek begins to wave excitedly as an old pick up truck rolls toward his position. As the truck stops, Derek jogs over to the passenger side window. The filthy window lowers as Derrick peers inside. "Excuse me sir, can you give me a lift to a petrol station? I had a breakdown a few miles ...

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