The potential benefits and risks of genetically modifying food.

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Richard Barclay

The Benefits and Risks of Genetically Engineered Food

In this essay I will be looking at the potential benefits and risks of Genetically Modifying Food.

The idea of genetically modifying food is, and has been, a subject of great debate for quite a while now, and all over the world GM food is available to buy.

The argument for and against GM good is split into 4 main groups, the group that think GM is the way forward, and the way to reduce famine, increase health etc, the group that thinks that GM food is the way forward because it increases efficiency, i.e. no pesticides needed, faster growing, better yields etc, then there are the 2 groups against GM foods, those who fear GM foods to be damaging, and that we should only eat organic, and then there are those who believe that GM foods is playing god. Of course, not everyone fits into a single one of these categories, for example many people are on the fence about the issue, there are people who just don’t care about the issue, and there are those who cross between the groups.

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There are some genuine Health risks that could arise from extensive genetic modification of foods, these risks include; New toxins and allergens in foods, Other damaging effects on health caused by unnatural foods, The creation of herbicide-resistant weeds, The spread of diseases across species barriers, Loss of bio-diversity in crops, The disturbance of ecological balance, Artificially induced characteristics and inevitable side-effects will be passed on to all subsequent generations and to other related organisms. Once released, they can never be recalled or contained.

For some companies there is also a definite advantage to boycotting or endorsing genetically modified food for ...

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The candidate repeats their title on the second page, which shouldn't be done because it looks untidy. Punctuation, grammar and spelling all done to a good level.

The candidate introduces the topic well, but they should have provided an explanation for what GM food is to show their understanding of the topic. The candidate accurately examined four different groups and their approaches to GM foods, although the way they mention the topic is quite casual so I would change the tone of the essay to suit the scientific essay format. The conclusion is adequate because it ties up loose ends in the essay and makes a valid conclusion based on the evidence presented. The candidate shows good depth of scientific research throughout the essay.

The response to the question is done well and the focus of the essay is also very well correlated with the question. Organic food however, is on the decline, so the candidate should consider this in their analysis of the foods.