Water is a molecule composed of two elements of hydrogen covalently bonded with one element of oxygen

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                Jesina Elliston

AP Biology Essay 1

Water is a molecule composed of two elements of hydrogen covalently bonded with one element of oxygen.  Because of the polarity created from the covalent bond these molecules of water are all connected with a hydrogen bond.  A hydrogen bond is formed when two molecules are attracted to oppositely charged components of another molecule.  A hydrogen bond has about 5% the strength of a covalent bond and is responsible for some of the unique qualities found in water.  It takes a large amount of energy to break down the hydrogen bonds in water allowing it to have a high specific heat, giving water its high boiling point and allowing it to maintain a liquid form over a wide range of temperatures. The hydrogen bonds also allow water to have high surface tension.  This happens because, although one hydrogen bond is relatively weak, when many of these bonds are formed between two molecules it causes the bonds to be sufficiently strong and quite stable.  Hydrogen bonding also influences cohesion, the clinging of a water molecule to itself or adhesion, the clinging of a molecule to another molecule.  

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        Water is known as the “solvent for life” or the “universal solvent”.  Water is a good natural solvent because it exits in the liquid state in its natural habitat.  Another one of water’s reasons for being such a good solvent is credited to its feature of having polar molecules.  When an ionic or polar substance is added to water it becomes the solute.  The high dielectric constant of water reduces the attraction between one atom to the others in a molecule when submerged, making water the excellent solvent it is.  Water’s peculiar trait about its order of density is that ...

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The explanation of water as a molecule is thorough. I like how this essay is structured, introducing the molecule's structure and then explaining how this structure contributes to the qualities of water. It was nice to see how this essay addressed how each quality is relevant, rather than just explaining it. I particularly liked how they mentioned cohesion enabled transpiration in plants - being able to link topics together will gain credit in exams or coursework as it shows an understanding of the syllabus. The use of scientific terms is strong throughout. This essay correctly explains polarity of water molecules and refers to it as the universal solvent - using terminology such as this is a sign of a strong essay! Whenever talking about bonds in biology, I always draw a diagram. So, an improvement for this essay would be to include diagram showing two water molecules with a hydrogen bond clearly labeled.

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