Another aspect of the soldiers’ state in this first stanza is their seemingly indifference and total mental abcense. The men ‘turned’ their ‘back’ on ‘haunting flares’ (l. 3) as if they don’t care what is happening even though it’s a dangerous situation. They are also said to be ´blind’ and ‘deaf’ (ll. 6-7) which indicates that they don’t even registrate what is happening around them. It almost is as if the men are more dead than alive, like zombies. This description of the soldiers creates an eerie image. Because of this imagery the atmosphere is fearsome too.
The eerie atmosphere is further enhanced by the diction Owen used. Nearly all the words have a negative connotation. A strong examples is ‘haunting’ in line three. People relate this word to troubling problems.
The words which do have a positive connotation are combined with others which take the pleasant feeling away. Like in line four where the calming word ‘rest’ is preceded by ‘distant’ which shows that it’s still too far away to have.
The situation in the second stanza is in complete contrast with the way it seemed to be in the first one. The second part starts with a sudden explosion of energy. Inmidiately in the first line the words ‘Gas! GAS!’ (line 9) are being cried out. The exclamation marks and the use of capital letters indicate that the words are being shouted out loudly. Then an ‘ecstasy of fumbling’ (line 9) follows which implies that there is a lot of movement. This first line is characterizing for the first half of the second part because it is full of action whereas the first part was one of rather static description.
Another alteration which occurs in the second stanza is the change from ‘we’ (eg line 2) to ‘I’ (line 14). The individual approach strengthens the ability of the poem to bring it’s message across to the audience because it’s easier to identify with one person than with a group of people. The identification will cause the reader to feel more engaged and engagement is a part of understanding.
A considerable part of the atmosphere in the second stanza is created by the description of the succumbing of a man in lines eleven to sixteen. Owen has compared it to drowning in the sea ‘as under a green sea, I saw him drowning’ (ll. 13-14). He used this simile because the poison gas actually made it look like that ‘dim trough the misty panes and thick green light’ (l. 13). The word ´dim’ tells the reader that the soldier can’t be seen properly. All together this imagery creates an eerie atmosphere similar to that in the first stanza.
The atmosphere in the third part is not just eerie but truly gruesome. This is mainly caused by the diction which create revolting images. For example in line 19 the word ‘writhing’ is used. It’s effect is further strengthenth by the alliteration ‘watch the white eyes writhing’. Another line which has a strong effect is number 22 ‘come gargling from the froth-corrupted lungs’. In this phrase the combination of the words with the same digusting connocation causes the horrible images.
After that part in which Owen has revolted the reader he writes the last four lines directly to a specific person: ‘my friend’ (line 26). This choice of voice makes this feel personally addressed which contributes to the communication of the message.
All in all Owen’s poem is very effective because of the way he is able to create certain atmospheres by using the language in such a way that the soldiers’ feelings and the condition they are in are communicated very effectively to the reader.
