Creative writing story in English and Malay

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Everybody must have an unforgettable experience, including  me. I have an unforgettable experience when I was about 17 years old        

Sometimes, I like to just lay back and remember the old days. I remember one day when my best friend came over to my house. We ate some meatballs and some tofu balls, and we stepped outside after lunch.

As we were walking to play basketball together, we saw a strange looking old man huddled in an alley. He had a little dog next to him that he was petting. The old man wore a dirty old shirt and short  pants, and he was sitting on a chair. The dog was a dusty-looking black and white haired. It had short hair and oversized ears.

My friend passed the basketball to me, but I was looking at the old man`s dog. The ball sailed past me and struck the old man in the head. He shrieked in pain. Then he pulled out a giant, sharp looking machete from his wicker purse!! His little dog snarled at us. He picked up our basketball and waved her knife at us. “YOU SHOULD BE MORE CAREFUL, LITTLE BOYS!” He yelled.

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My best friend and I stared at each other in shock, and then we turned and ran. His little dog followed us, yapping and snarling at our heels. The old man took the ball and threw it over us… the ball went past us and down the road was the basketball court. It must have been 30 meters away and this old man got the ball in the hoop!

The old man got a swish! I couldn’t believe it! I turned around. “Old man! I am sorry! Please don’t hurt us!” He bared her dirty, brown moldy looking teeth at ...

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