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How to breathe underwater- rewrite a section of "Care"

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Written Task: Rewrite the story in First Persons omniscient "Get Kenji," I tell the voice in my head. "Dial Kenji." Please hang up and try again. What!?What is going on here? I can't hang up now, people who are waiting for the phone are gonna take it away from it once I hang up. If you'd like to make a call. Since when did these things become so god dam complicated? Each number pressed leaves my head in dire need of a pain killer or something along those lines. That dam voice again! I remember when a phone call was only quarter, now I just pray as I reach into my pocket that I have enough change left. ...read more.


I can't come get you! I'm extremely fucked up at the moment." Oh great, I thought that I could depend on him just at least once! "You have to come," I say, practically begging, "Olivia's gone!" I hang up on him. Fuck this, why is he never here when I need him, ok fine! I don't need Kenji. He doesn't understand. Okay, Olivia, where is Olivia?? I need to find her. Soon, my head spins and I have to sit down on the curb. Looking at the road, thinking about nothing, what am I doing? 'Bang bang' cars running towards me, come here and greet me, let me fill you up with my blood. ...read more.


What am I doing all alone here? I need to find her. I found my self in a park when my mind is a little clearer, I still could feel the Devvie and Sallie spreading through my body, distracting my brain from thinking my next step. I stand near this flower bed near a bench and I take the pillbox out, I look inside, hesitated to take another one. There are only two Devvies, and one more Sallie. I knee down on the grass, starting digging a hole, I put the pillbox deep inside the hole and then bury them. I should not have it with me; I need to keep the pillbox away from me for now. ?? ?? ?? ?? ...read more.

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