The Loom

The extract taken from The Loom by R L Sasaki paints a picture of a mother, and how she tries to hold on to the memories of her children from the past. The mother finds refuge from coping with her time in weaving; weaving is a primary symbol. It is the idea of merging the past vibrant memories with various threads and the present moment through the production of textiles. Throughout the passage, Sasaki uses literary devices such as sentence structure, tone and diction to highlights the complexities of family through the years.  

Instantly, by looking at the relationships of the four daughters, the granddaughter and the mother, the reader gets insight in the distances and the bonds in which they share with their mother. Sharon, the middle daughter, plays an important role because she presented the loom to her mother; the loom helps her mother stay sane. Although Sharon has the time to visit more often than the others, as she was only a “substitute” teacher or now “working part time,” she chooses not to. When she does stop over, it is usually to “borrow a tool” or to “help trim trees in the garden,” thus only helping with the chores and not spending quality time with her parents. Furthermore, when she visits her mother, it is to do some kind of “favor, or bring[s] a treat.” The fact that Sharon gives her mother “a treat” is condescending; it is almost as if she is repaying her for a good deed.   Linda is a constant figure within the mothers life, she “loyally and staunchly [defends] the fortress in which her mother seemed to have taken refuge,” thus she stands by her mother knowing the truth in her actions. Moreover, the fact that Linda works means she is only able to meet her mother once a week, mostly because she has to leave her “own daughter Terry.”  Terry, the granddaughter, is emotionally attached to her grandmother, “Bachi.” This is evident as she “would cling to her [Bachi], crying at the door;” they have a special bond as she “never wanted to leave.” The daughter with the least importance is Cathy, which is apparent because there is only one reference to her and that is on the small fact about “blue, Cathy’s favorite color.” There could therefore be a deeper reason as to why she does not play an important role within the mother’s life.  

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Jo is a very prominent and important character; this is true as she is constantly referred to in every passage. This passage begins with one of the daughters, Jo, deciding to “give up” on her mother. Jo has a deep history with the mother, who brought her up, cured her from illnesses and taught her how to walk. Jo shows strong displeasure towards her mother’s hobby because she is insistent on finding a way to bring her out of her obsession, even suggesting “shock treatment…it’s the only way to bring her out.” This is insensitive because Jo disregards her ...

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