Candidate Number: 000322 – 061
World Literature Assignment #1:
ATROCITIES ATTRIBUTED TO UNJUST PUNISHMENT IN CAMUS’ OUTSIDER AND
SOLZHENITSYN’S ONE DAY
By Sharon Pao
Word Count: 1,345
K. Lorenz
Friday, February 01, 2008 IB English 12 HL
The two principle questions revolving around punishment are, “What gives us the moral right to punish anyone when we are imperfect ourselves?” and “What do we hope to accomplish when we punish someone?” Punishment is a penalty imposed for wrongdoing. Injustice is the violation of another’s rights or of what is right; lack of justice. Together, unjust punishment can be defined as the imposition of a penalty that greatly exceeds the crime that was committed. This act of punishing unjustly and immorally is prominent in both literatures that were examined. Atrocities attributed to unjust punishment in the short novels, The Outsider by existentialist author, Albert Camus, and One Day in the Life of Ivan Denisovich by early 20th century author, Alexander Solzhenitsyn, critically challenges human dignity. The purpose of this paper is to analyze the display of unjustified punishment manifested throughout the two novels and how the characters, especially Meursault and Shukhov, adapt to the punishments while retaining a sense of self dignity.
Instances of unjust punishment are peppered throughout history during times of war and captivity. It was mainly a method of maintaining power and fear. An important aspect of the Stalinist work camp described in One Day in the Life of Ivan Denisovich is that the inmates have been convicted of wrongdoings that do not seem criminal to us. Gopchick, a character in the novel, took milk to freedom fighters hiding in the woods; Shukhov was captured by Germans and then accused by the Russians of being a spy; Tyurin was the son of a rich peasant father. We know little about the crimes of their fellow inmates, but none of them appears to be terrible criminals. Whether the Soviet government has enforced unfair laws or simply made false charges, the inmates’ back-breaking labor in subzero temperatures is grossly unjust punishment. The laws and punishment within the labor camp are as unjust as those outside the camp. Shukhov gets into trouble and is threatened with three days in the hole not for any active wrongdoing but simply for being ill. Similarly, Buynovsky, unable to stand the cold, protested that they “have no right to strip men in the cold” (Solzhenitsyn 38), receives ten days in the guardhouse for trying to bundle up against the cold with a flannel vest. Neither Shukhov’s illness nor Buynovsky’s attempt to stay warm harms anyone, but the camp treats both as deep violations of the law, worthy of severe punishment. Such harsh retribution for such small offenses is absurd, and the heaping of more punishment upon men already locked into long, hard prison sentences seems like nothing more than a cruel exercising of power by Soviet officials.