In the extract from A Pair Of Blue Eyes, Thomas Hardy has created suspense, a state or condition of mental uncertainty or excitement[1], as an effective method of telling the story. It shows us a character Knight, and the trouble he faces.
‘Suspense’
In the extract from “A Pair Of Blue Eyes”, Thomas Hardy has created suspense, a state or condition of mental uncertainty or excitement, as an effective method of telling the story. It shows us a character Knight, and the trouble he faces. It is split up into three paragraphs which each play their own part in telling the story with a 3rd person narration. In the first & second paragraph the reader is introduced to the problem facing the character Knight. In the third paragraph the reader is given an insight into the thoughts of Knight. The author creates this suspense in this extract with the use of paragraph structure, imagery of the setting and third person narration.
The paragraph structure of this extract is one of the key elements the author has used to create suspense. Thomas Hardy has created this suspense by firstly starting the first paragraph with “At first, when death appeared improbable because it had never visited him before….”. Here the reader knows very little about the situation facing Knight and are left asking questions but also wanting to know more, such as who the character Knight is, why he is in a battle with nature and how dangerous the situation might be for him. In the second paragraph the author is feeding the reader images of the surroundings, which helps with further understanding into Knights situation. Here Hardy is careful to give only a detailed image of what Knight can see as well as his feelings, which then makes it apparent to the reader that he is dangling off of a cliff edge, which keeps the suspense high as the reader wants to find out how this has happened and what the future holds for Knight. The third paragraph allows the reader to relate to the character in his feelings, but does not give an indication of Knights fate further holding up the suspense.