Teacher Annotated Essay. I will look at how organization of thought can improve memory by discussing mental images, concepts and schemas,.

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Alison Sheridan A3923376 Y163

TMA01 Task 1 part B

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In this essay, I will look at how organization of thought can improve memory by discussing Mental mental images, Concepts concepts and Schemasschemas,. I will look at what they are and how they have been proven to help improve our memory with evidence from various experiments. Ok - the intro gives me some idea of what to expect, but like the plan it lacks sufficient detail to be truly useful. State the research (names/types) and examples that you will use.

Firstly I I did send you an email advising you to avoid the use of subjective language, whilst some tutors don't seem to mind the use of 'I' in essays - it is not the academic norm in psychology to use language like this - you should try to be as objective as possible - I will 'correct' the next few sentences to give you an idea of what academic writing looks like will look at Mental mental Imagesimages; mental images are pictures in our mind (Icomic icomic thoughts) that will give us individuals a cue to help us