LaRay Silz

November 28, 2008

Week 5 Persuasive Essay

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The Economy is in Trouble

        The economy is getting so bad in the United States that everyone is starting to notice it.  From gas prices to business, the changes are becoming more and more noticeable to all kinds of people.  People are constantly talking about it everyday.  There are rumors that there will be a so called “civil war” between all people who will be robbing and stealing trying to survive and feed their families. Our government needs to really start making some changes for our economy or this world will be in a lot of trouble. Some of the reasons are oil drops, the issues small business owners are facing, and the inconsistent behavior of our gas prices.

        The stock market has gone up and down because it is our barometer of economic confidence. The price of  oil has dropped to $58.00 a barrel. Xeta shares have increased 26 cents, or 18.98 percent  and was the top percentage gainer at one point and time. Devon energy fell $5.97, or 7.84 percent last session. According to the Department of energy, natural gas supplies have increased by 62 billion cubic feet one week! Retail sales have dropped by 2.8 percent, and that is the largest drop on record. The realization that 2009 is going to be a very bad year is starting to dawn on people and they are starting to digest how bad the economy is getting.

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        Due to recent surveys, as much as 95 percent of small business owners are feeling like their business is being challenged. They are seeing things like “decreased amount of sales, less access to credit, health care costs and rising gas prices.”( Hudson Valley Business Journal ) According to many small business owners, they are doing things like reducing expenses, cutting back on staff, decreasing business travel, minimizing marketing efforts, and many aren’t giving bonuses and/or raises anymore. They are looking at ways they can “increase efficiency from valued employees, and increase productivity in any possible way, often through new technology”.( Hudson Valley ...

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