In his article "The populations of France and Quebec", Franois Drieu tries to establish a comparison between the French and the Quebeckers.

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Monday, December 2, 2002

FOURTH ESSAY

CRITICAL THINKING

The populations of France and Quebec

Vincent Drieu, 1998

     In his article “The populations of France and Quebec”, François Drieu tries to establish a comparison between the French and the Quebeckers. This reasoning is not completely devoid of sense, on the contrary, it is rather logical. Indeed, French and Quebeckers have a certain common background; French people are still affectionately nicknamed “our French cousins” by the Quebeckers. However, this article is above all characterized by a lack of objectivity. There is absolutely no doubt that the author comes from Quebec; it is also obvious he knows only few things about France. As a French person, my point of view will probably be biased too. But, I think it can be interesting to shed new light on this subject. That is why my essay is built on the necessity of new enlightenment in the comparison between the populations of France and of Quebec.

 The essay will consist of an analysis of the shortcomings in the form of the article by François Drieu and a correction of misconceptions in its content.

  1. Analysis of the shortcomings in the form:

     The first criticism can be addressed to the organization of the text. The structure of the article seems effective; it seemed like the author had organized his ideas well: he wants to prove the limits of the comparison between the French and the Quebeckers. At the end of the introduction, he clearly outlines the three parts of his argument: he gathers the differences between the two populations in three main groups: the distribution of the population, its origin and its mentality.  Each paragraph contains an idea, examples and/or data.

Nevertheless, if you examine the article more closely, the structure turns out to be too mechanical. With three paragraphs of the same length, the question is oversimplified. Human thought is not necessarily organized in three points; it is just a rhetorical ideal. And, sometimes, when this three-part scheme is too fixed into the writers’ mind, they unconsciously limit their reasoning to fit this model. His conclusion is a good illustration of that shortcoming. At the end of it, F. Drieu mentions another probable cause of the differences between the French and the Quebec populations: their environment, but he never uses this argument. One of the first things a first-year student is taught is not to finish an essay with a completely new element.

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It is all the more a pity in this case, since this point can be relevant. Indeed, the Quebeckers have to evolve in a special environment; they are meeting the challenge of living in French and maintaining a French-speaking society in North America, which is home to 250 million English-speakers. That is why they attach lot of importance to the protection of their language. In 1977, a law was passed by the Quebec Parliament and resulted in “La Charte de la Langue Française”: it is aimed at reducing the use of English in Quebec. The same kind of feeling has ...

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