Commentaryon the passage from Wilkie Collins' The Moonstone is taken from chapter four of the narrative.

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Kate Etienne

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        The passage from Wilkie Collins’ The Moonstone is taken from chapter four of the narrative. The passage suggests that this work is a fictitious novel due to the form of prose as well as its lack of factual reference. This section of prose is one which contains great amounts of description and is effective in pulling the reader into the narrative in a short period of time. The reader is introduced to two characters in this section and is allowed to learn much about both in a short period mostly through description and not through delving into inner thought. Much of this is achieved through the use of narrative voice.

The narrative voice used by the author of this passage is that of first person narrator. The narrator of this passage is Mr. Betteredge. Mr. Betteredge is speaking to us, the reader, which is an affective way of drawing the reader further into the narrative. He is an elderly gentleman; we know this by the reference he gives to the difficulty he has sitting down on the beach,

        “When you come to my age, you will find sitting on the slope of a beach a much longer job then you think it now.”

Through the language used by the narrator, it can be seen that he is a well spoken man, educated, and by the reference to “the plantation” as well as his “bandanna handkerchief – one of six beauties given to [him] by [his] lady” and his job as “head of the servants”, one can assume that he is reasonably well off financially. He also seems to be a kind character in the way he speaks to the other character present in the narrative, Roseanna.

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        “‘Come and sit down, my dear, on the slope of the beach along, with me. I’ll dry your eyes for you first, and then I’ll make so bold as to ask what you have been crying about.’”

        The narrative begins with the Mr. Betteredge’s description of the surroundings of the household he resides in on the Yorkshire coast. There are ample amounts of imagery, used in the first and second paragraph of the passage, to develop a picture of the setting of the narrative for the reader in order to create the desired atmosphere of the author.

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