He, the narrator tries to persuade his mistress by being very forthright and by being very bold, telling her what he is going to give her. However, in Donne’s poem, which is parody of Marlowe’s, Donne has the same two opening lines but the last two of the first stanza are very different. “…Of golden sands, and crystal brooks
With silken lines, and silver hooks.”
The difference here is that Donne says that we will go to the countryside but instead of looking at valleys, mountains and hills which is what Marlowe says, he and his mistress will have a lot of fun.
In Marlowe’s poem he says,
“And I will make thee beds of roes
And a thousand fragrant poises,
A cap of flowers, and a kirtle
Embroided all with the leaves of myrtle;”
What Marlowe means is that, not only will he take her into the countryside but he will dress her like the country side meaning flowers. But Donne says,
“There will the river whispering run
Warm’d by thy eyes, more than the sun;
And there th’enamour’d fish will stay,
Begging themselves they may betray”
Donne is trying to say that she will get in the water and her eyes alone will warm the water more than the sun, which is an example of hyperbole. He says that when she does get in the water and baith, the fish will nibble. This creates a raunchier image, also it brings in the element of physical contact.
In the next stanza Marlowe then says, “A gown made of finest wool
Which from our pretty lambs we pull”
This suggests that not only will he protect her but also he will provide her with wealth in an attempt to influence her decision. In Donne’s the approach is different. In the fourth stanza Donne says, “If thou, to be seen be’st loth,
By sun or moon, thou darken’st both”
Donne’s message, which he is trying to put across, is that the sun and moon are bright, but you are brighter. As you can see Marlowe’s way of wooing her is very different to Donne’s way. Marlowe has a flattering approach whereas Donne makes his point very clear in the start of the poem, which is come to bed with me.
Marlowe ends his poem with a very interesting stanza. In the first two lines of this stanza he says, “The shepherd’s swains shall dance and sing
For thy delight each may morning”
Hw is trying to say to her that he will get all his friends to dance for her and that if all these things do matter to her, she should come and live with him:
“If these delights thy mind may move,
Then live with me and be my love.”
But when Donne ends his poem, he says, “For thee, thou need’st no such deceit
For though thyself art thine own bait”
He says that you are not just able to catch the fish but you are also able to catch the fish but you are also able to attract them referring to her beauty. To end the poem Donne says, Donne says, “That fish, that is not catch’d thereby
Alas, is wiser far than I.”
What Donne is trying to say is that any fish that is not caught by her beauty, is cleverer than him. From this it is clear that he is love sick.
It is very clear that Marlowe’s approach is innocent and evokes idyllic images. Donne is much more down to earth and realistic using words like “coarse” and “bold” and “slimy”. His poem is therefore more sensuous, suggestive. Marlowe employs language, which maintains the sense of innocent beauty. He uses words like “pretty”, “purest”, “fragrant”, and “finest”.
The rhyme scheme in both poems is very strong to make a good argument because in their own ways they are both out to woo the woman and also to show their passion and determination. Also in Donne’s poem he is very precise and thorough about what he says, getting to the point very quickly. Donne uses the same rhyme scheme as Marlowe but to different affect. This is underpinned by his use of words that would not normally be associated with love poems such as “treacherously”, “traitors”, “strangling” and “deceit”.
We have analysed two very different poems yet we have demonstrated that there exist many points of contact. Ultimately, the poems are both about love and this theme blinds them most closely. No two love poems are alike, but this only serves to illustrate the many-faceted nature of love itself.
