ELIZABETH AKINNITIRE

  MS BEECHER SHEPPY

        10B1

           

COURSEWORK: CREATIVE WRITING

 

PLEASURE TURNS SOUR

A big beautiful mansion sitting right up the road of a busy small town. The outer parts is as beautiful as a paradise and it everyman’s fantasy with a welcoming golden writing hanging on the beautiful light blue wall. The inner part is as bright as a tunnel with loads of space. The building was so bright that it light up the whole town.

I was on a tour with some friends to find an interesting adventure to write in our novel.

We have travelled from town to town till we came to this town called GRAVE HILL. The people of Grave hill are very nice people and there were loads of things to write about the town and the way they survive on their little farm and how they live together as a family helping each other in time of trouble. They were very welcoming and made us feel appreciated and they also were willing to help us with our adventure and they also promised to show us around the town but because we arrived late they told us to wait till morning. The only problem we had was accommodation; the people never had a big apartment to accommodate us.

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  You can pass the night in my Attic...Said the Old Lady

AN ATTIC... exclaimed Sandra Hell no, How can I live my big bedroom all just to come and sleep in an attic, there is absolutely no way that is going to happen (she whispered).

We were not thrilled by the old woman’s offer so we refuse it. Having being attracted by the golden bright writing ‘A HOME FOR PLEASURE’ on the front of the big bright mansion that was up the road we ask the people if we can pass the night there, the people did not hesitate to ...

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