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GCSE English Assignment: Twentieth Century Drama

The Crucible

"Proctor is a guilt-ridden individual struggling to find his true self." To what extent do you believe this is true of John Proctor, and how is it conveyed to the audience in the course of the play?

John Proctor is a key character within The Crucible, displaying great emotion and immense passion for what he believes in. He has sinned and he knows it, but that does not mean that his sins have gone forgotten. As the play develops, the audience can see that he repents his sins and will fight until the end for his wife's forgiveness and the real truth to be spoken. Some people may say he is "guilt-ridden", after all, he does hold a secret, but as the play draws to a dramatic end, John Proctor's "true self" hangs for all to see.

At first glance, John Proctor is a farmer in his middle thirties, and appears to the audience to be a strong manly figure:

"respected and even feared in Salem"

This quotation partly contradicts with the essay title quotation, as usually someone who cannot find their "true self" is afraid to voice their true thoughts and yet, other people within Salem, are scared of him. This may be because he is envied in the village; he has a wife and children and appears to be comfortable with his high status life style. Or, this may be because Proctor is not "guilt-ridden", and does not feel the need to repent his sins. This quotation suggests that even though Proctor has sinned, he still has a reputation to keep and is willing to lie to keep his "good name", this is not the "true" John Proctor.

When Proctor is first introduced into the play, Arthur Miller suggests a physical relationship between Proctor and Abigail Williams:

"the faintest suggestion of a knowing smile on his face"

This quotation highlights that there is something that both Proctor and Abigail know. A "knowing smile" usually suggests a secret, but this is not a small secret kept between friends, it is such a secret that can ruin a man's reputation forever; a secret shared by lovers. Even though Proctor knows that communicating with Abigail could seriously jeopardise his marriage, he still cannot resist smiling when he sees her. To the audience, this could be conveyed that Proctor is not feeling "guilt-ridden" and therefore does not feel remorse for his affair.

Pretence and lies have consequences and those consequences are showing in Proctor's and Abigail's actions. To some extent hiding the characters' true-selves:

"Abigail has stood on tiptoe, absorbing his presence, wide-eyed."

The stage directions help the reader understand that Abigail is very keen to persist with a relationship with Proctor. Abigail's "concentrated desire" for him, is certainly not a feeling shared by Proctor. His body language shows the audience that he is not interested in her, "setting her firmly out of his path". There is an obvious distinction between Abigail and Proctor's body language; Abigail is very assertive, whereas Proctor is quite tense and apprehensive with the whole situation. This is not John Proctor's "true self"; normally a very confident and self assured man, Proctor is feeling the pressure and is not comfortable with the position he is in. Suggesting that Proctor is not his "true self" and may be a "struggling individual"
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The true Proctor is not one to keep his feelings inside; when he thinks something should be said, he says it:

"We vote by name in this society, not by acreage."

Proctor's independent thinking may have a great impact on society; most are scared to say what they feel and just follow trends, so for someone to have courage like John Proctor may lead to jealousy within the Salem community. Also, others could feel threatened by his ability to say what he thinks, and therefore feel under pressure to better themselves. This contradicts with the essay ...

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