Comparing Herodotus and Thucydides

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In this essay I will be looking at the key contrasts and comparatives of Thucydides and Herodotus and how they are trying to present their material. Firstly, Thucydides has written his work on the Peloponnesian war and also the build up and aftermath; on the other hand Herodotus has written his work on several things, but in particular the Persian invasions. Because they both have written about different things we can guess that the way they are trying to present their material differently.

Firstly, the main comparative between both Herodotus and Thucydides is the amount of detail they include within the text to show the information which they want to tell you. For example in Herodotus the level of detail he goes into about Xerxes troops is very substantial, he may have done this so that we get a very clear picture and that we understand of what is going on. This is the same in Thucydides as he goes into a lot of detail about the Athenian naval fleet; this again is used so that we get a clearer view of what is going on.  There are many other examples in their writing to show the amount of detail they use to show their points. Although, there is also one main difference in their writing, Herodotus does stick to the point most of the time in his writing, although, he does sometimes have the odd digression, usually about geographical locations. Thucydides, on the other hand, usually gets explaining something, but ends up saying something completely irrelevant to what we need to know. An example of this is when he starts praising Themistocles when he doesn’t really need to.

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Next, speeches play a major factor in both bits of writing. In Herodotus he uses speeches to sometimes clarify a point, such as the conversation between Demaratus and Xerxes, these are mainly small speeches, and are mainly used to back up one point. Whereas, Thucydides includes speeches which take up 3 or 4 pages of his book, an example of this is Pericles funeral speech, which goes on for quite a while. Although this is important in the context of the part of his book, it offers very little relevance and information for us. This could show that Thucydides ...

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