Discuss the economic consequences of unemployment

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Sam Burton

Discuss the economic consequences of unemployment

        As the level of Unemployment is at a new high, the consequence this is having is becoming more and more obvious. Having a huge workforce willing to work without making good use of them is a waste of resources. This has an impact on factories and manufactures because by not using the labour force they are limiting their ability to produce more goods and provide more services. This would make living standards higher; however these unemployed workers are not being put to work. By not employing workers the government has to pay a state benefit to these people, which is reducing their overall profit. By reducing the government’s profit, we are preventing them from spending the profit on improving education, care, transport or health. This effectively limits our standard of living and prevents it from improving. In order for the government to actually prevent themselves from actually losing money they would have to raise taxes to afford to pay for all of the unemployed. Higher taxes rates will reduce people’s disposable income and their spending power. A rise in government borrowing may push up the rate of interest, which in turn will also reduce their spending power. As the government has to pay benefits to those unemployed, principally job seeker’s allowance it has to reduce spending on health services such as NHS and education. It has already made decisions to reduce or bring to a halt the management and construction of council estates and made huge cuts on the NHS. If unemployment was lower taxes should be less and the standard of living and/or the production rates should be higher.

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The unemployed workers themselves will also become a problem. Many of those left unemployed are more likely to suffer from health problems such as mental illnesses. This will also continue to strain our economy. An increase in health problems will mean higher waiting lists for health care, thus reducing our standard of living. Many left unemployed or made redundant as a result of government cuts may also turn to crime. This means that the government will need to improve the judicial system and spend more money on improving the police. As job cuts are made by the government due to ...

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This essay lacks an introduction, which would've been a good opportunity to define unemployment and why it occurs. This would've naturally allowed the discussion of the significances of different causes, gaining evaluative marks. Also, a clear introduction would've showed the knowledge and understanding necessary early on. There is some attempt at a justified judgement in the conclusion, saying there are benefits and negatives. This is where the essay needed to talk about the significance of a consequence, possibly concluding that this is why low employment is a macroeconomic objective. Spelling, punctuation and grammar are strong.

The analysis in this essay is sound, but there is room for improvement. The first paragraph does well in addressing the problem of wasted resources due to unemployment, however it was a shame not to see efficiency discussed. I always like to get a diagram into an economics answer, so If I was answering this question I would've included a PPF (production possibility frontier) showing where a state of unemployment is. The progression through the points is strong, as each step of the analysis is explained clearly. This shows the examiner a strong understanding of the consequences, as you show why each stage occurs. However, they have missed out on talking about international competitiveness. This theme could feature in all points. For example, a waste of resources means that UK firms are less productive and so their products are more expensive on the international market. Increased spending on benefits and social security has an opportunity cost of spending on education, which would increase productivity. If other countries are investing in education, the UK will fall behind internationally. Being able to link an argument to all of the points would be strong! The hysteresis paragraph is particularly strong, as this is a concept which is often confused. Both negative and positive consequences are considered throughout, but once again elaborations could be made. For example "The existence of high unemployment levels may also discourage workers for asking companies for raises, thus saving the company money" shows good awareness of a benefit. I would've put a simple statement saying that this puts less upwards pressure on wages, and thus inflation.

This essay engages with all the main points relevant to this question, however there are places where the analysis could be more detailed. When the question uses a command word such as "discuss" or "comment" that is prompting you to make an evaluative statement. This could be an exploration of which consequences are most significant, or to what extent unemployment is always unfavourable. It was a shame not to see any evaluation in this essay, and so this essay would not gain the highest marks. Whenever you talk about unemployment, you must discuss what causes the unemployment to gain evaluative marks.