Explain the possible impact of a world-wide recession on the components of the circular flow of income for a small and open economy such as Singapore.

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1023A
4a.) Explain the possible impact of a world-wide recession on the components of the circular flow of income for a small and open economy such as Singapore. [10m]
The circular flow of income for an open economy is a model that shows the flows of goods and services and factors of productions between firms and household and in the process injections and withdrawals are made by the government and the rest of the world. This model shows that household provides the factors of production for firms who produce goods and services. In return the factors of production receive the factor payments (such as wages, dividend, and profits) which are in turn spent on the firm’s output. The circular flow of income can be expanded by injections (addition to the circular flow which does not come from the domestic expenditure of the household in the form of investment, government expenditure, export revenue) and reduced by withdrawals (any part of income not passed on within circular flow of income in the form of savings, taxes, imports).

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Quality of writing
The structure of this essay is strong, having a clear introduction which defines and explains the circular flow of income, and a conclusion which summarises the essay points. What I particularly liked was the first sentence of each paragraph in this essay. They are all short and concise, giving a clear signpost to what is going to be explained. This allows examiners to allocate marks easily, and forces you to stay on focus when writing! The style here is strong, with phrases such as "therefore" and "hence" showing a clear understanding of the mechanism involved. This makes for a convincing argument, and when used with technical terms, a very strong economics essay.
Level of analysis
The analysis in this essay is strong. There is a clear discussion of a number of leakages and injections. I particularly liked the discussion of elasticities within the arguments, as this is a higher level concept, and it shows how the question has been applied to Singapore. Being able to tweak a discussion based on the dynamics of the economy in context is a great skill, and this essay does it well by using GDP figures, etc. There are always marks for application in economics essays, so this essay is a good example of how to pick them up. In my opinion, this essay should've discussed the multiplier. A small decrease in investment will result in a larger decrease in national income, for example. So, a discussion of a vicious cycle would've been relevant here. This could've been used in the conclusion to make it slightly stronger.
Response to question
This essay engages with the question superbly. There is a good understanding of the circular flow of income from the introduction, however I would've liked to see a diagram to display this knowledge further. I particularly liked how they looked at Singapore in context, noting a heavy reliance on export-led growth. Throughout the essay, the impacts of a recession are made clear, and the steps to how this affects the circular flow of income flow well. Being able to show a mechanism clearly in economics will gain credit, and this essay does it well.