Blanche is depicted as unstable from the beginning of the play. Discuss

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Blanche is depicted as unstable from the beginning of the play. Discuss

“A Streetcar Named Desire” was written by Tennessee Williams. The play is set in New Orleans were ‘you are practically always just around the corner’. This means that it is a close knitted community and a cosmopolitan city ‘where there is a relatively warm and easy intermingling of races’.  Blanche is Stella’s sister and she takes a Streetcar Named ‘Desire’ to one called ‘Cemeteries’ and ‘ride six blocks and get off at Elysian Fields!’. This already gives us a foreshadowing of later events as she has been led by desire to her destruction or mental death. Blanche arrives and stays with her young sister, Stella.

When we are first introduced to Blanche, she appears to be lost and out of place with the surroundings. She portrays vulnerability and people help her without her asking for help. On a first impression, she would appear innocent looking but as time goes on, we see that all is not as it is portrayed to be. She appears to be jumpy, nervous and fragile to small unnoticed sounds like when ‘cat screeches’. We also get a glimpse of her true personality when she is alone, ‘she pours a half tumbler of whiskey and tosses it down. She carefully replaces the bottle and washes out the tumbler at the sink’. The way she handles the drink gives us the impression that she is not new to the idea of drinking. When her sister comes home, she acts like she doesn’t where the drinks are, ‘I know you must have some liquor on the place! Where could it be, I wonder?’ this portrays her as someone who is an alcohol addict and she doesn’t want anyone to know. She lies as she pretends she doesn’t know where the drinks are.

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Blanche is also depicted as being hysterical, attention seeking, dramatic and dominating the conversation. She tells her sister, Stella not to look at her. She says she doesn’t want Stella to look at her but  that is what she really wants. ‘Now, then, let me look at you. But don’t you look at me, Stella, no, no, no, not till later.’ She is loquacious though she tries to cover this up with the pretence of being an English teacher. She fills the air with benign words. She gives answers to questions before they are voiced.

Blanch Dubois also needs affirmation ...

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This essay has a poor structure. The introduction gives backgrounds details to the play, and makes the irrelevant statement that Tennessee Williams was the writer. Only at the end of the introduction is there evidence of some engagement with the task. A strong introduction should be cogent and focus on summarising the main techniques, whilst offering a starting point for discussion around why Williams presents Blanche as unstable. The essay then goes through the scene chronologically looking at how Blanche is depicted. A more sophisticated essay would be looking at techniques as a group and writing about them together to form detailed analysis. Similarly, there is no conclusion here, and this is a missed opportunity to directly answer the "discussion" element of the question. Spelling, punctuation and grammar are fine here. As mentioned above, the style is slightly off here. There are numerous repetitions of "She is" whereas it's much stronger to write "Williams constructs Blanche to be" as this shows the examiner you have a focus on the authorial intent.

The analysis here is basic, and there needs to be more focus on specific techniques. It is clear this writer has a strong knowledge of the play, giving a range of points from the opening scene. However, I would note that at A-Level a good knowledge of the texts isn't going to get you the top marks. Comments such as "Blanch Dubois also needs affirmation and reassurance about her looks." simply retell the story, and add little to the argument. If I was writing this essay, I would be phrasing this sentence along the lines of "Williams constructs Blanche to need reassurance about her looks by having her repeatedly question her beauty." By looking at how Williams constructs the play, you naturally progress towards discussing the techniques and the effect it has on the audience. I would've liked to have seem more discussion around Blanche's instability leading to her tragic downfall. When discussing this play, it's always a great start to think about its genre, as examiners will be happy to see discussion relevant to tragedy.

This essay responds well to exploration of Blanche's unstable depiction, however it is lacking discussion around why Williams constructs his play to begin like this. There's only one part in the essay where there is a discussion around the effects of Blanche's instability on the audience: "This already gives us a foreshadowing of later events as she has been led by desire to her destruction or mental death." Such comments need to be sustained throughout the essay rather than isolated to the introduction where you can't weave it into any analysis.