Choose a poem that reflects on the idea of change. Show how the poet explores the subject and explain to what extent your appreciation of the subject deepens.

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Choose a poem that reflects on the idea of change. Show how the poet explores the subject and explain to what extent your appreciation of the subject deepens.

        

        The poem “In Mrs Tilschers Class” by Carol Ann Duffy is about the transition from childhood to adolescence. Duffy highlights the things we learn at school from our teachers and from fellow pupils throughout the poem.

        In the poem Duffy associates the feelings we have in humid weather with the physical changes of puberty. Leaving Primary School for the last time is like an escape we are eager to make but which takes us from safety to a dangerous unknown. Throughout the poem Duffy refers to ‘you’. She means herself as she was in Mrs Tilschers class in the 1960’s, but by writing in second person she invites us (the reader) to share her experience. By doing this I think that it’s effective because it allows the reader to be a spectator just like the poet increasing the need to carry on reading.

        The style of the poem is sensory – this means the poem appeals to our senses, images and feelings. She does this especially well in this poem by creating a classroom that we can all identify with no matter what our age is. “You can travel up the blue Nile with your finger, tracing the route while Mrs Tilscher chanted the scenery”. Later on in the poem we can feel the changes in the children who become irritable and impatient to leave. “A tangible alarm made you always untidy, hot fractious under the heavy, sexy sky”. She is also highly effective in creating snap shot images so we really get a sense of the environment she is creating. She manages to describe scenes so they are almost as clear as photographs, picking up on not only her own memories but tapping into those of her readers also. Most people remember the little bottles of milk that they were given every day in Primary School and you can sense the chalk dust blowing around the classroom as the pictures of the pyramids are rubbed out “a skittle of milk; and the chalky Pyramids rubbed into dust”. I believe this is a clever way of getting the reader to continue reading because most adults these days can remember these experiences whereas today’s children don’t have this in schools nowadays.

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        In the poem Duffy is exploring the changes that take place between childhood and adolescence. The language that Duffy uses reflects the happy trusting relationship between teacher and students in early years and then highlights the difficult transition to become a teenager. Duffy makes use of a lot of figurative language (imagery: similes, metaphors and personification). She uses these things to help the reader of the poem see clearly what she herself remembers. In the first two stanzas these images are mainly positive “the laugh of a bell swung by the running child”, here Duffy personifies the bell so that ...

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