Compare and contrast the struggle for identity in the face of outside influence in Death of a Salesman by Arthur Millar where Biff Loman is pressured to be something that he is not; and Making History by Brian Friel,

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Liam Fuller                                                                                              English Coursework

Compare and contrast the struggle for identity in the face of outside influence, with the view that Biff Loman has the greatest struggle.

The Struggle for identity is a common theme dealt with by much of modern literature. Two pieces of literature that deal with this struggle in the face of outside influence are, ‘Death of a Salesman’ by Arthur Millar – where Biff Loman is pressured to be something that he is not; and ‘Making History’ by Brian Friel, where Hugh O’Neill is torn between two opposing forces, whilst being pushed to be a hero that he is not.

Biff Loman, in 'Death of a Salesman' is not able to be himself due to the views and dreams that are enforced upon him by his father. Biff was constantly told by his father that he should aim to be the best. Unfortunately, for Willy, Biff was never that boy in terms of his practical orientated mind and love for the outdoors. Willy Loman is the inspiration to his son in everything that he believes in – passing on the views that his father has about the ‘American Dream’. Biff is unable to be happy and find his identity because of his feelings towards his father’s dreams and expectations, and his father thinks that Biff is capable of doing the things he wants him to. However, Biff is deluded by the vision that his father is the ultimate role model and will support him no matter what, but still does not know who he is himself.

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Similarly, Hugh O’Neill in ‘Making History’ does not know he is. He is influenced by others about who he should be, but in fact, he does not know who he is, or who he should be. This is reflected in how O’Neill uses two accents. The use of two different accents indicates that his loyalties are split between two opposing countries, as well as the idea that he is split internally with who he should side with.

Biff’s father influences him in many ways - one of which is by encouraging him to focus on his sporting aspirations as ...

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This essay covers the ground of the topic but never quite gets to grips with the major points of similarity and contrast. These are two men torn by opposing forces, Biff by his struggle to reconcile his loyalty to his father with his own true nature and O'Neil torn between two national loyalities. Issues of identity emerge in the playing out of their inner struggles. The structure is loose and repetitive; the same points are repeated in different paragraphs and much improvement could be made by a little editing. Sentence construction is mostly adequately controlled, with some errors of structure and punctuation. On the whole, a promising essay, demonstrating useful insights into these plays but not quite pulling them together. 3 stars