William Wordsworth was born in Cumbria in 1770 and attended Hawkshead Grammar School. In 1787 he went to Cambridge. Wordsworth had an affair with a French woman and had a child but they didn’t marry. He was always tormented with guilt particularly during the war between England and France. I think that these feelings had an influence in his poetry. Wordsworth had a very close sister-Dorothy whose diary used to give him inspiration. Wordsworth got married and in 1813 he was appointed Stamp Distributor that meant that whilst he wrote his poems he had a guaranteed income. In 1843 he became Poet Laureate. His sonnets are among his best known poems. I wondered lonely as a cloud was published in 1807. And he also likes to bring a sense of meaning to his poems.
The first couple of lines;
“Fair Daffodils, we weep to see
You haste away so soon”
Start of the poem and it is saying that ‘we’ are sad to see the ‘daffodils’ fade ‘haste’ away so soon. Robert Herrick has set the tone of the poem by saying that the daffodils are dying and that he is said to see them go.
Third and fourth lines;
“As yet the early-rising sun
Has not attain’d his noon.”
Early rising could possibly indicate that the seasons are changing and beginning of a new day.
5-7th lines;
“Stay, stay
Until the hasting day
Has run”
This part is saying that he doesn’t want the daffodils to go or die until the day is over. Herrick describes the day as going very fast ‘hasting day’
8-12th lines;
“But to the evensong;
And, having pray’d together, we
Will go with you along”
“We have a short time to stay, as you,
We have as short as spring;”
Robert Herrick is saying that we (humans) have as short as life as daffodils. And mentions that it is as short as spring in which is the only season when daffodils can survive.
13-15th lines
“As quick as growth to meet decay,
As you, or anything.
We die”
Describing that when we get older we will ‘meet decay’ e.g. Diseases. And then die.
16-20th lines;
“As your hours do, and dry
Away
Like to the summer’s rain;
Or as the pearls of morning’s dew,
Ne’er to be found again.”
Carrying no from before still saying that as we ‘dry away’ which for humans could mean getting old or for daffodils which could mean the soil around them dries up (in which case the daffodils cannot survive). At the end of the poem he’s saying that life is very precious like a ‘pearl’ delicate but once you have gone you can’t return to the life that’s just past you.
“Stay, stay. Until the hasting day” is a type of assonance that adds to the effect of Robert Herrick’s poem.
The first couple of lines;
“I wandered lonely as a cloud
That floats on high o’er vales and hills,”
Starts off in poetic person saying that he is very lonely relating it as a ‘cloud’.
3-4th lines;
“When all at once I saw a crowd
A host of golden daffodils;”
This part suggests both people ‘host’ and daffodils a ‘crowd’ describing that there is a large number of daffodils or people.
5-6th lines;
“Beside the lake, beneath the trees,
Fluttering and dancing in the breeze.”
Describing the position and whereabouts of the daffodils and describing the scenery. The next line ‘fluttering and dancing’s telling us the action of the daffodils saying that they are whirling in the wind.
7-8th lines;
“Continuous as the stars that shine
And twinkle on the milky way,”
Stars are endless and the milky way gives the sense of the universe, lots of open space, which cannot be filled.
9-10th lines;
“They stretched in never-ending line
Along the margin of a bay:”
‘Never-ending’ possibly a sense of immortality. ‘Bay’ is still setting scenery of the daffodils.
11-12th lines;
“Ten thousand I saw at a glance
Tossing their heads in sprightly dance.”
Ten thousand is a very large number and is a type of hyperbole giving an exaggeration for an effect, showing that the place is quite crowded and the ‘tossing of their heads’ indicates they could vein and the ‘sprightly dance’ shows the energy levels are high and that they are very lively.
13-14th lines;
“The waves beside them danced; but they
Out-did the sparkling waves in glee:”
Describing more of the scenery and that the waves are also happy and sparkling. And trying to do better than the daffodils. I think this is a very good piece of imagery because as you read the poetry you build up a picture inside your head.
15-18th lines;
“A poet could not but be gay,
In such a jocund company:
I gazed-and gazed-but little thought
What wealth the show to me had brought:”
Saying that the sight could not bring anyone more joy as the daffodils, waves etc. are so cheerful and merry.
19-20th lines
“For oft on my couch I lie
In vacant or pensive mood,”
This is a change of scene when the poet is deep in thought.
21-22nd lines
“They flash upon that inward eye
Which is the bliss of solitude;”
‘They’ subjects people. ‘Inward eye’ could mean a vision or describing some kind of meditation.
23-24th lines;
“And then my heart with pleasure fills,
And dances with the daffodils.”
‘My heart’ which represents head is filling up with joy from thinking about the daffodils and dreams of being with the daffodils, ‘dances with the daffodils’.
In William Wordsworth’s poem he used personification e.g. “The waves beside them danced” and “Tossing their heads in sprightly dance” in which waves do not dance and daffodils do not toss their heads in a sprightly dance. In this poem there is no alliteration in which I can note.
“Continuous as the stars that shine” is a type of simile that adds to the effect and imagery.
Conclusion
I think Robert Herrick’s poem was very successful as he shows that time passes quite quickly and describes the preciousness of life. I also think that William Wordsworth poem was also a great success. I think that the poem is open-minded and a happy one to read. My favourite out of the two studied though is Robert Herrick’s as you can relate to it and know the feelings that he is expressing throughout the poem.
