Compare how Willy Russell portrays the two mothers in "Blood Brothers". Account for the different reactions the audience will have towards the two women

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Sophie Ripley

Compare how Willy Russell portrays the two mothers in “Blood Brothers”. Account for the different reactions the audience will have towards the two women

In Willy Russell’s musical “Blood Brothers” he uses contrasting character to portray his ideas on socially disadvantaged people during the 1980s. He champions the poor; he sets his musical in Liverpool where the divide is obvious. By looking at the two mothers, Mrs Lyons and Mrs Johnston the divide, socially clear.

The audience first come across Mrs Johnston when she enters the stage with her back to the audience sweeping and singing. The audience’s first impression of Mrs Johnson conforms to the working class stereotype and her low status. This is supported by the fact that she lives in social housing and is down trodden. The lyrics of the song contribute to this.  She sings “By the time I was twenty-five, I looked forty-two...” During the song she is describing her past life and how she became pregnant “…the three months on I found myself in the club again…” Before Mrs Johnson finishes her sing, the milkman interrupts her demanding his money “…you owe me three pounds, seventeen and fourpence an’ either you pay up today, like now, or I’ll be forced to cut of your deliveries.” Mrs Johnston is not quite sure how to reply and tires to reason with him to pay next week. The audience feel sorry for her because she cannot afford to pay her bills.

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Will Russell portrays Mrs Johnston as a single parent living in a social housing estate with many children and another on the way. However she doesn’t realise that she is having twins, until further on in the play. Mrs Johnston’s children like herself; I do no think have a very high education. This is velar by the way they communicate with one another “Ey Mother, I’m starvin’ an’ there’s nothin’ in. There bloody well is.” This quotation also suggests that she doesn’t earn a large amount of money. Mrs Johnston tries to reassure her children by saying “…Next week ...

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The Quality of Written Communication raises many points and is not really very good. The candidate makes frequent errors ranging from small things like accidentally writing "Will Russell" and not using the appropriate punctuation when writing the title of published works (the candidate uses quotation marks ("Blood Brothers"), when they should use inverted commas ('Blood Brothers')), to far large issues like malapropisms ("This is velar by the way they communicate") and misquoting the play "(Their born you and you didn't notify me?"). All these issues need to be addressed, some of them can easily by rectified if the candidate conducts a read-through and spell-check to iron out any mistakes a spell-checker might miss. If candidate's fail to do so, it sends a message to the examiner that they do not really care enough about their own work to correctly ensure clarity in their written expressions.

The level of Analysis here is fair, but very biased towards Mrs. Johnstone. Almost all subsequent analysis for Mrs. Lyons appears to feature Mrs. Johnstone, whereas some of the candidate's analysis of Mrs. Johnstone alone ignores Mrs. Lyons, so the answer does not present a balanced comparison, or any very interesting comparative points at all. There is evidence of an attempt to do this, but the candidate does not, as the mark scheme requires, "provide interesting and insightful comparative points". A lot of the obvious comparison is just that - obvious. To improve, I recommend the candidate selecting what could be different or similar between them that is beyond the way they speak and what they do in the play. Think of their backgrounds (one wealthy, one poor); their positions (one a single mother of many, the other a rich woman bored and unable to bear children), so with these two things we can see both woman are discontent with their love lives, but Mrs, Johnstone at least has borne children from her frequent love affairs. Mrs. Lyons, trapped by propriety has only one partner and is not able to bear children, hence is bored and feels undervalued despite her wealth, with no-one to care for. This is the level of detail the candidates need to consider, particularly at A Level.

The answer here is a good attempt, but there are fundamental flaws in relation to the question, meaning it is not wholly satisfied by the answer, Where the candidate's answer is good is their sound analysis of Mrs. Johnstone (the candidate frequently misspells this character's name, writing "Mrs. Johnston"). They show a good understanding of how Russell created the class divide through the use of stereotype, commenting on accent and her social background (some more analysis of the social context of Liverpool at the time may assist here). The structure of the answer is a bit awry, with a clear bias towards Mrs. Johnstone and only very limited consideration of Mrs. Lyons. The candidate would serve themselves better if they considered how both characters differ or are similar, select one particular point to analyse in each paragraph, and comment on the differences and similarities between the two, before going on to the next point. Candidates are instructed to "Compare" the portrayal of the two mothers, and so explicit comparative points are necessary to earn the highest marks, although there is an obvious lack of explicit comparative points here.