Critical analysis of the opening chapters of Waterland.

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Critical analysis of the opening chapters of Waterland

“…and each one of them was once a tiny baby sucking his mother’s milk…”

        This conclusion to the book’s opening paragraph epitomizes the first 4 chapters – a seemingly ambiguous idea that bears no real resemblance to anything. However, this is because Graham Swift writes deliberately, and even the strangest subject is actually entirely relevant to both the plot and story. This allows him to develop his novels in his own, unique way (Although numerous parodies of other writers are present in his words; the most apparent example being Thomas Hardy and his descriptive style, where Swift describes the setting for periods of time, relating it to his characters) and fully explore his setting through his words, in this case The Fens. The first four chapters of Waterland do not introduce a plot that has lots of substance, save for the discovery of the body, which “belonged to Freddie Parr”, and the “cutting back on history”. However, this is not Swift’s aim – he attempts to acclimatise the reader to his world (Most evident in the Chapter 3 description “About The Fens”), through first the introduction of the characters (Sometimes brief, sometimes more developed) and then the region they live in.

        Swift begins his book writing “About the Stars and the Sluice”. In this chapter we learn of Tom, Dick and his father, Henry, Crick (As well as Freddy Parr at the climatic end of the chapter). Interestingly enough, it is a humble anecdote that begins the story from Henry Crick, “whatever you learn about people, …each of them was once a tiny baby sucking his mother’s milk…” This prophetic quote is typical of Henry Crick in the novel’s opening. He is described as a “superstitious man” (The theme of superstition and folklore is a recurring one, and is evident throughout the book), a trait that frequently appears during the course of the book. Tom says that his father “had a knack for telling stories. Made-up stories, true stories;” this is supported by Tom’s recollection of one midsummer night when his dad said, “Do you know what the stars are?” His father’s story about the stars strikes a chord with Tom, who admits some of his father’s tales are believable in the first chapter. The stars are referenced indirectly in Chapter 3, when we are told Henry Crick “always believed that old Bill Clay…was really…a sort of Wise Man.” This creates the image of The Wise Men following the Star to Bethlehem, as if to suggest the characters themselves are following their own star (Possibly meaning being led by fate, as the fates of people were said to lie in the stars). We do not even learn what Tom’s relationship with Dick is in the opening four chapters, such is the vagueness of Swift’s style. It is not until later known that Dick is Tom’s brother, and the irony that surrounds his name (In that Dick has an extremely large penis). In fact, he is only referred to twice, and that is to learn he is four years older than Tom. The mystery around this figure is puzzling, Swift leaving the reader feeling interested and inquisitive about the character. However, we find the main character to be Tom Crick, the narrator of the book. He is an intellectual man, and also a history teacher. We can trace these traits to the first chapter, where Tom explains that, “it was my mother who first told me stories, which, she got from books as well as out of head…” He brings his intellect to his narration, which helps the reader understand the apparent reliance on history to help the story progress, using Latin phrases such as, “Ipso facto” (Suggesting his knowledge is plentiful and that Lewis shouldn’t actually fire him, as he’s valuable to the school). Tom’s only real admission of his own feelings is when he speaks of the “cuts” of the History Department (Him being one of them), which brings out the frustration and jealousy in him (Acting like a sulking child when saying, “It’s still his ship”, as well as the fact that Lewis “doesn’t say” certain things (The rhetoric emphasising his obsession over Lewis’ apparent negligence). Certainly the characters (In particular Tom), although not explored deep early on, begin to exhibit their complexities by the end of Chapter 4, Swift almost signifying his intent to prolong the full release of their emotions and feelings.

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        Even though the opening four chapters are only 26 pages in length, Swift wastes no time in introducing the main themes of his novel, most notably change, history and evolution. All three can be found in Chapter 3, “About The Fens”. Tom explains that “silt caused them [the “shallow, shifting waters of the Wash”] to retreat”, labelling it an obstacle to water. Whereas the idea of the book is about water never staying the same and constantly changing, silt impedes change, and leaves things as they are. This is both a metaphorical and literal process, as Tom seems bound to ...

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