Exploring Diverse Cultures.
Exploring Diverse
Cultures
`Diverse Cultures' are the study of other cultures and opinions of
major issues from different origins and ethnic backgrounds. I will
examine different points of view of various poets from diverse
cultures and how they express cultural ideas in their poems. I have
chosen to study three poems, which I researched, with different ideas
and cultures. These poems are by Benjamin Zephaniah, Linton Kwesi
Johnson and Robert Lowell.
The poem by Zephaniah that I have chosen to study is called "Kill Them
before Ramadan". I have chosen it because it made me think and I feel
that it is quite appropriate to write about it at this time with the
Iraq issue brewing again. Zephaniah is a black British poet, whose
family originated from Jamaica. He feels that he has strong Jamaican
roots and he often reflects this in his poetry by his use of Jamaican
dialect and oral style. However, he also sometimes writes in formal
English, showing his ability to switch between the two for maximum
effect in his poetry. Zephaniah's poetry is meant to be read aloud and
holds his viewpoints of the world. He expresses himself in his poems
and tries to give the reader his views. His views tend to be those of
the minority, and he tries to make you think about his subject matter.
The second poem that I have chosen to study is called "Rage", written
by Kwesi Johnson. Linton Kwesi Johnson was born in Jamaica and came to
England when he was about 11 years old. Like Zephaniah he uses an oral
style and can use both Jamaican and formal English dialects. His poems
tend to be about racial oppression and prejudice. I have chosen this
poem because I feel that it really addresses race issues and opens
doors into the mind of a minority race.
Robert Lowell was a white American poet from a wealthy background. His
poetry is typical of a more complex literary style and is in formal
English. He often hides his ideas in abstract idioms with deep
meanings not always seen the first time a poem is read. His view is
much more objective, and the language more calm and less `in your
face' than either Zephaniah or Kwesi Johnson. The poem by Lowell that
I have chosen to study is "For the Union Dead" because although it may
not echo the views of modern America, it struck a chord with me.
Firstly, I shall write about "Kill them before Ramadan" by Benjamin
Zephaniah. In 1991, Saddam Hussein the (then and current) leader of
Iraq invaded Kuwait. It became clear that he not only wished to invade
Kuwait but also wanted to move troops into Saudi Arabia. Consequently,
acting on a UN mandate, coalition forces moved into the region (known
as the Gulf) to oust the Iraqi army and restore order to the region.
The President of the U.S.A., George Bush senior, whose army supplied
the majority of equipment and manpower conveyed to the media that it
would be wise for the issue to be dealt with before Ramadan, the
Muslim holy time. The operation was launched and was named `Desert
Storm'. I feel that I should write about this poem as it has many
parallels with the current situation, with George Bush junior planning
to take over Iraq, liberate the people and instate a democratic
government.
The poem starts with a description of what Muslims do during Ramadan.
Zephaniah uses this to give the reader an idea of what Ramadan means
to a Muslim:
"Ramadan is a time for reflection
Contemplation and meditation."
He continues to describe Ramadan and builds up to a final blunt
statement:
"So we must (we are told)
Kill them before Ramadan"
The writer uses irony to point out that we will be killing them before
they can reaffirm their beliefs and ideals. Zephaniah seems to be
ignorant to the fact that many Muslim fanatics would not stop to think
of our holy time, Christmas. It seems that it is acceptable for them
to preach death during our holy time, but for us even to think of
doing such a thing is atrocious. By placing "we are told" in brackets,
he implies that it is not our decision, but that of Bush and Thatcher,
and that we have no say in the matter, and that it is propaganda.
The next stanza is synonymous with the first in that it ...
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ignorant to the fact that many Muslim fanatics would not stop to think
of our holy time, Christmas. It seems that it is acceptable for them
to preach death during our holy time, but for us even to think of
doing such a thing is atrocious. By placing "we are told" in brackets,
he implies that it is not our decision, but that of Bush and Thatcher,
and that we have no say in the matter, and that it is propaganda.
The next stanza is synonymous with the first in that it talks about
what happens during Ramadan, and it ends in a similar blunt statement:
"We should do the right thing,
We must
Kill them before Ramadan."
He uses irony again to emphasise that the so-called "right thing" is
to kill them.
The subsequent verse talks about how we would feel if we were told
that we would be killed before Christmas:
"And God knows we love Christmas."
Zephaniah goes on to talk about how it is not the fault of the Iraqis
that they live under a dictatorship despised by the West:
"But someone must be unfortunate enough
To live under a rogue regime"
Here the poet emphasises that the West seems always to have a
scapegoat. However in the 60's the Iraqis voted Saddam into power, and
in the recent election (where Saddam was the only candidate) 100% of
the voters voted for him. The Iraqi peoples may well be unfortunate
"To live under a rogue regime" but they appear to be quite happy that
way.
Zephaniah then accuses the West of being hypocritical because they
possess weapons of mass destruction:
"Great hypocrites shed your plutonium tears."
We may well possess them, but the UN regulates them and we do not have
a mentally unstable psychopath behind the controls. The use of the
phrase "plutonium tears" is unclear; he may be warping the phrase
"crocodile tears", meaning fake sorrow. Zephaniah may also be implying
that our pity soon turns to destruction and death.
He then launches an attack on the media:
"Why should you not believe
That the only innocent victims
Are your innocent victims?"
He uses repetition to make the reader feel questioned and
uncomfortable, so they will question themselves and their beliefs, the
underlying point of the poem.
Zephaniah then talks about caring for your children, and making sure
that they are comfortable. Then he says:
"Do not tell them that Iraqi children shit themselves
Every time the President of the United States has an erection."
He uses the expletive to express anger and to shock the reader,
especially when used with the idea of children. He then accuses the
President of the United States of getting some sort of sexual kick
from wars and making people fear him.
He continues:
"Let us remember that some Iraqis are Christians"
Here he seems to have the misconception that the war is against Islam,
not Iraq. Some Iraqis may well be Christian, but we are not attacking
any specific religion or its followers.
He talks about people worrying about their husbands or sons fighting
and talks about how:
"Saddam is bad
Saddam is bad"
"War is bad
War is bad"
He uses repetition to reaffirm the beliefs of many, and also to
emphasise that everyone agrees on the statements, whether Muslim or
Christian. However there is a problem; to get rid of Saddam (who is
definitely bad) we have no alternative but to go to war (which is
definitely bad). It is therefore up to the reader to decide which is
the lesser of the two evils.
Zephaniah talks about `Desert Fox', an operation launched in December
1998 after UN weapons inspectors (who ensure that countries do not
develop weapons of mass destruction) were rejected entry to the
country. Is it not suspicious that they are not allowed in and that
intelligence reports that Iraq may be developing nuclear weapons? He
talks about people having Muslim friends and Muslim stories, however
the war is against Iraq, so why make an irrelevant comment like that?
At the end of the last stanza, he bitterly retorts that we should not:
"Intrude on their spirituality
Or disrespect their religion
So we must
Kill them before Ramadan."
It is ironic that we must not treat their beliefs with contempt, but
we should kill them.
Zephaniah is a British man, but with Jamaican origin. He experienced
the feeling of being a minority group and being the victim of it. This
is why in a dispute he will always argue for the smaller side, the
minority group. Another example of this would be in "Christmas Has
Been Shot".
Linton Kwesi Johnson is, as I mentioned above, also a black poet, but
he tends to write about issues which are `closer to home', i.e. racism
and prejudice in Britain. I have chosen to study his poem "Rage".
The poem begins:
"Imprisoned in memory
of the whip's sting,"
This stanza implies that a person has been beaten, and that they are
forever stuck with the memory of the pain and suffering they endured.
It is likely that as the poem is written by Kwesi Johnson, who tends
to write about racism, that they person in the poem was beaten by a
racist.
He describes the pain:
"tear in the flesh
and the fire burning within,"
The phrase stretches over two stanzas, a technique that is called
enjambment and Kwesi Johnson uses this to help the poem flow. He
describes how the whip damaged the skin, and how the pain was like
fire inside the body, giving the reader a graphic impression of the
event. This helps the reader to both understand the awfulness of the
attack, and place the reader "into" the poem, helping them to
understand the underlying meaning of the poem.
He uses an interesting paradox:
"his eyes sing pain silently"
By using it, he describes the look in the man's eyes, one of pain.
Eyes can't "sing", they are silent, but the way they show the pain may
be so vivid that it is almost as if they are singing it out loud for
all to hear.
Kwesi Johnson continues:
"His hatred created swift and sweetly"
This shows how easy it is to create anger and hate. The man may well
have been a good member of society, but one incident has changed him
forever.
The next two lines of the stanza read:
"he waits with rage
clenched tightly in a fist."
These lines show how his rage is contained in his hands, ready to be
released on whomever may incense him again.
He continues with:
"Soon some white one will stroll by,
and strike he will to smash
the prison wall of his passion
and let his stifled rage run free."
A "white one" probably refers to a white person, and the other lines
are metaphors. The passion refers to the mental wall inside him
stopping his rage from getting out, but his feelings have been so
incensed by the beating that he had, he will break it down inside him
and release his fury.
Kwesi Johnson has shown how racism is made in the mind of a black in a
world were prejudice is rife. This is an effective way of showing the
effects of racism and how it peoples should always be unprejudiced and
fair-minded.
The poem that I shall write about now is called "For the Union Dead",
and is by Robert Lowell. The poem is about America 100 years after the
Civil War. It is about the changes that happened in the period and how
values have changed. The Civil War was fought between the North
(Union) forces and the South (Confederate) forces. The Unionists were
fighting for the freedom and liberation of slaves, and the
Confederates were fighting to keep the 4 million slaves that produced
the crops of the South. Within the poem, Lowell describes the way the
only black regiment was led by a white man and how they marched
through Boston.
Underneath the title, there is a Latin epigraph:
"Relinquunt Omnia Servare Rem Publican"
This means "They gave up everything to serve the Republic" which
describes how the black soldiers gave up their lives to defend a
cause, and how that must have been very important for them to die for
it.
The poem begins by talking about an old aquarium:
"The old South Boston Aquarium stands
in a Sahara of snow now."
South Boston used to be an area of pasture until 1803 when the area
was developed to create more space for the increasing population of
Boston. The South Boston Aquarium was built there as well as many
other boat clubs and beaches. These attractions brought many people to
the area so this reference could be interpreted as this rural getaway.
However, more recently, there were riots in the 1970s to do with
racism. This idea links in with Lowell's poem and so could be another
interpretation. But I still think the first is more likely because the
poem was written several years before the riots started.
In this quotation, Lowell uses an interesting paradox, "a Sahara of
snow". It has contrasting ideas, the "Sahara" which is hot, sunny and
dry and "snow" which is cold and wet. This aids in describing the
barrenness of the area, forever bathed in a blanket of snow.
He then describes the appearance of the aquarium:
"Its broken windows are boarded.
The bronze weathervane cod has lost half its scales.
The airy tanks are dry."
The quotation shows the aquarium has been left to rot and is very run
down and not used for a long time. The cod was a symbol of
Massachusetts and mostly Boston. Cod was also the driving force of
main slave trade so this could have been the reason for its inclusion.
The poet goes on to describe fond memories of visiting the aquarium:
"Once my nose crawled like a snail over the glass;
my hand tingled
to burst the bubbles
drifting from the noses of the cowed, compliant fish."
He talks about his hand tingling, almost as though it was his hand,
not his brain that wanted to burst the bubbles. He describes the fish
as "cowed, compliant fish" illustrating the obedience of them to
display their colours and shapes to the world.
He feels saddened that the aquarium is not still in operation:
"I often sigh still
for the dark downward and vegetating kingdom
of the fish and reptile."
It is not only the aquarium that has been neglected. He talks about
Boston Common being dug up to make way for a new car park:
"as they cropped up tons of mush and grass"
It seems to Lowell that everything that was once for the community,
and for the people is being destroyed for money and commercialism. He
reinforces this feeling with the next line:
"Parking spaces luxuriate like civic
sandpiles in the heart of Boston."
The "civic sandpiles" are the piles of old American values, and the
poet shows his anger that the parking spaces seem more important than
these value. He shows this by using repetition of "s" sounds, a
technique called sibilance which creates a tone of contempt. The next
line reads:
"A girdle of orange, Puritan-pumpkin colored girders
braces the tingling Statehouse,
shaking over the excavations, as it faces Colonel Shaw"
It is ironic that the only Puritan idea that links with the Statehouse
is the colour, not the values, ethics or ideals. The poet also thinks
that the placing of the statue in front of the Statehouse is ironic
that Colonel Shaw should stand up for the values of the Puritan
settlers.
In the seventh stanza, Lowell mentions something that William James
said:
"at the dedication,
William James could almost hear the bronze Negroes breathe."
He includes this to describe the statue and to show that when it was
made, it was as if it was real. This might represent that once the
statue stood for the Negroes and what they fought for, but now it is
about money.
Lowell goes on to use an interesting simile:
"The monument sticks like a fishbone
in the city's throat."
He uses this to describe how out of place a statue that stood for
freedom and the liberty of peoples is in a city were commercialism and
money are the modern values. This also represents that the city is
choking on it and wants to get rid of it.
In the next stanza, he describes the Colonel using metaphors:
"He has an angry wrenlike vigilance,
a greyhound's gentle tautness"
These metaphors convey the idea that he is always watching, ready to
pounce. A wren is a North American bird that is very protective.
Lowell could have been describing the way that Shaw was like to his
regiment.
He goes on to mention that:
"he seems to wince at pleasure"
He might wince in pleasure, because now is the century of the self,
and people are only interested in themselves, unlike him who fought
for the freedom of others.
The poet then says:
"He is out of bounds now."
This means that nothing can hurt him now because he has died and also
the fact that he has been made a hero.
Lowell continues:
"The stone statues of the abstract Union Soldier
grow slimmer and younger each year"
This stone `growing slimmer each year' may be the literal erosion of
them, but it may metaphorically be the erosion of their values, and
what the fought for.
The poet goes on:
"Shaw's father wanted no monument
except the ditch,
where his son's body was thrown"
Shaw's father might not have wanted a monument because he could have
believed that the blacks should stay as slaves, and that his son was
wrong to fight amongst them. This is backed up by the fact that Shaw's
body was "thrown" like some rubbish. However, I believe that the
interpretation is that Shaw's father was proud of his son. Those who
died while in battle were allowed to have their bodies sent to their
families for their funeral but Shaw's father probably decided against
this as he thought that a soldier's most appropriate burial place is
was the ground on which they had fallen.
He continues:
"There are no statues for the last war here;
on Boylston Street, a commercial photograph
shows Hiroshima boiling"
Lowell feels that American values have deteriorated so much that they
cannot even commemorate their war dead. They use pictures of death and
destruction to advertise goods and they are obsessed with money.
Lowell writes:
"When I crouch to my television set"
He is bending down to the television, he is a slave to its programmes
and it is almost as if he is crouching down to worship it.
The penultimate stanza reads:
"Colonel Shaw
is riding on his bubble,
he waits
for the blesséd break."
Colonel Shaw wants to be removed from this world of commercialism and
money, he is waiting for the almost sacred break allowing him to be
free. He is still waiting because his statue still stands, torturing
him and making him see the world for which he.
The last two lines read:
"a savage servility
slides by on grease."
This refers to the slavery of the people to money, and profit. Colonel
Shaw fought in vain for the freedom of the peoples, for we have found
another master, commercialism.
Although the three poems differ in style and content, the meanings of
them all are the same. They are all writing about ethnic minority
groups and how they are looked upon and how this leads to racism.
