How effective are the opening chapters of "Cold Mountain"?

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Michelle Bailey 12N/R         2200 2833

How effective are the opening chapters of “Cold Mountain”?

Comment on: Characters, Language, Narrative/structural devices, Setting, Themes and Symbols

The first two chapters of the novel are effective in establishing the basis of the story in terms of the plot (including setting), the main characters and any other characters that affect them and themes which will be continued and developed throughout the novel. During this essay I will discuss how each of these factors makes the first chapters effective.  

The first few pages effectively establish the setting of Inman’s story. By describing Inman’s daily routine we can clearly see how and where Inman has been living the past weeks of his life allowing the reader to build up a picture of the setting. Frazier does not simply describe how the ward looks in a long descriptive passage, instead, details about the conditions and appearance of the hospital ward are included only when Inman is describing what he does to pass the time e.g. we are indirectly told about the conditions of the ward when Inman is playing a game “Inman could cock back on the chair’s hind legs and count the flies…he made it to be sixty three”. This effectively shows the reader that although Inman is in a hospital the conditions in which he is living could cause infections to be worse. In the same way we are told about the dampness which has the effect of making the reader feel sympathy and disbelief that men who were fighting for their country would be allowed to “survive” in such conditions – “so damp it caused fresh sheets to sour under him”. The hospital is described using “real” objects that we can imagine. For example it describes sheets, and what happens to books, it also describes the dampness as being like “breathing through a dishrag”. This effectively allows the reader to imagine that they were living where Inman is, and therefore allows the reader to feel more involved and directly understand how Inman would feel living in the hospital. The fact that a hospital is the place in which Inman’s part of the story begins is important, as it allows the reader to see Inman at his worst, and is therefore effective as it means we receive a truthful view of Inman. If he was in a pleasant place, we would not see Inman’s real thoughts; he may conceal his horrible thoughts as they would not be triggered by anything, as they would be in the hospital due to the bad conditions. However conversely we may receive a pessimistic view from Inman because of where he is living, and the fact that he has nothing to look forward to, everyday is the same. This is shown “QUOTE”

The same can be said about chapter two – Ada’s story. We are immediately shown that she is living in less than perfect conditions QUOTE.

The fact that the language used to describe such things is in a very “matter-of-fact” tone, shocks the reader as we cannot believe Inman and the other soldiers on the ward would think of such things as being normal i.e. the flies on the ceiling. This is effective due to the fact that the reader is horrified at the fact that ill people are living in such conditions, and can begin to build up a picture of what it must have been like, and develop feelings for the suffering. Similarly this point is shown when Inman is talking about his wound i.e. the objects that it “spits out” – “mainly the wound wanted to clean itself”. This shows not only the fact that he thinks this is normal, but also the severity of the wound is highlighted without Inman telling the reader directly how bad the wound is.

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We are also given information about Inman’s wound through the fact that people thought he was going to die because of it – “his two nearest companions…looked at his neck…said him a solemn farewell”. This effectively shows the severity of the wound, as people did not believe he would survive and so gives the reader an idea of how much people value human life. This is more clearly shown by the opinion and actions of the doctor. “He was classed among the dying and was left to do so”. This is effective as it shows the reader not only the ...

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