ZAKEER HUSSAIN

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The cold wind was blustering through the branches of the huge oak tree casting a shadow over the bleak body that lay at the base of the room. As the death of the boy was laughed at by the group because they thought it was a joke. The group lighted as he writhed violently. He was a very clever, chubby boy who lay on his bed, with the tearstains that were still wet.

        I stared out of the dusty window as the camp bus bounced over the narrow, winding road. Stumpy white trees lined the road like fence posts. We were well into the wilderness. We had not passed houses or farms for hours. The bus seats were made of hard black plastic. When the bus hit a bump, we all bounced off our seats. Everyone laughed and shouted. There were twenty-four children going to the camp on the bus, many of them were boys. The boy next to me had the window seat. He looked a bit like a bulldog. He had a round face and overweight arms and legs. He had short, waxy black hair, which he scratched a lot. He was wearing grey shorts and a sleeveless white shirt. He didn’t really say much.

        I thought he must be introverted, or maybe very nervous. The weird thing was that he was always looking at the child in front of us who was called Danny. Danny was a small number of seats away from us. He always boasted about how good he was at sports and how he was going to become an athlete when he was older. Danny was the only person who was loud and chatted to the girls and made rude jokes. He was very foolish and laughed like a horse.

        The road was even more rutted and a sign emerged at which everyone pointed to. It was a white wooden, arrow saying “Camp 100 yards”. The picture in front of us was now a large barrier, which divided the outside heavens from the clammy dungeons. As we got off our unpleasant seats we were taken to the office and were put into groups. My group had Danny, the boy who sat besides me, twins and me. The twins were identical, no one could tell them apart, because they had the same colour bags, jackets and trousers, except that one of them wore trainers. Danny came last year to the camp and so did the boy, for the twins and me Jack and James it was our first. We were allocated a room for our group. For some strange reason I noticed that we were given four beds instead of five.

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        The timing of our arrival was pretty late, so my flock decided to go to sleep. We had fun the next morning. We all woke up really early. The sun was just rising over the horizon to the south – east and the air was still cool and damp. I could hear birds chirping.

        The sound reminded me of home. As I lowered myself to the floor and stretched, I thought of my mum and dad. I was definitely homesick. Luckily there wasn’t anytime to feel depressed. After we pulled on fresh clothes we hurried along to the hall. ...

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