First comes the classic Angela Carter theme of sexual domination and submission. The villain is to blame for all this – the male. The male who fits Angela Carter’s classic formula perfectly. The tall, dark and dominant male is someone who doesn’t usually speak much and has a sinister side to him and his actions are motivated by dishonourable intentions. Like the Bluebeard story, which this in a modern interpretation of, his household reflects his personality : big, rich, dark and filled with secrets, “…that castle…a mysterious…place…with the melancholy of a medmadian who perches on her rock and waits, endlessly. That sad...place” that place! That place which had so many room, “which were all so fine that they seemed to surpass one another …[each containing]…the best and richest furniture”.
Then there is the female or ‘damsel’ as is the case in fairy tales. The damsel is played by a 17 year old girl on the verge of womanhood who is a pretty naïve person, taken in by the French Marquis’ (her husband) personality, his wealth and the world he can offer her , “I was seventeen, and knew nothing of the world” she says – an indication of her gullibility . This wouldn’t be a Carter story if Carter used the normal conventions of a fairy tale by using a naïve girl to play as the helpless female. So in Carter’s story, the damsel is more clever and manipulative than we are initially led to believe. She quickly catches on that she is playing with fire and her husband is not a man to be pushed emotionally. Curiosity drives her boredom to explore the forbidden room in an attempt to find out more about her husband’s secrets, maybe she thinks ,“If I had found some traces of his heart in a file marked: Personal, perhaps, here, in his subterranean privacy, I might find a little of his soul…” The overwhelming curiosity is too much for her and like a child in a sweet shop she has to find out, Carter also uses imagery to intensify our emotions and plays on the words blood as in the Bluebeard tale where the female also finds herself in the same predicament when she also enters the ‘bloody’ chamber and finds the bodies of the ex wives her husband, “….all covered over with clotted blood….”
The next part to Carter’s story is that the sexual themes are now set. Carter sprinkles her gothic tale with subtle yet effective imagery to intensify our emotions to leave us with a sense of curiosity. Carter remains true to her formula of domination and submission and most of the imagery she uses is related to the situations that arise in the book. Red or blood is often used to symbolise the illusion of death or as is the case of Carter the young girl’s virginity ,which she loses and therefore her innocence which she regrets thinking to her self , “I had bled... I had been infinitely dishevelled by the loss of my virginity”.Yet The blood imagery has a significant role to play in this particular chapter as the Marquis refers to the hanging of the blood stained sheets (after claiming a wife’s virginity) triumphantly outside to flaunt his successful corruption.
The Bluebeard from the original is described as “frightfully ugly that all the women ran away from him” – another contrast from the Carter, as her Marquis is portrayed as a man who exudes class and charisma and can have a plethora of women should he fancy. Music plays an important part in Carter’s story as it symbolises innocence in our narrator (the young woman). Our narrator finds comfort and salvation at the hands of her piano which she describes as her ‘magic tool’ where here “…own particular magic might help me , now, that I could create a pentacle out of music that would keep me from harm”. The music in Carter’s story has an almost religious significance as the young girl feels as if she can cleanser her feelings of guilt and sinfulness from God.
The “Bluebeard” tale has a theme of religious belief running through it, more so than the “Bloody chamber”. In the “Bluebeard” tale, the young girl prays to God that she can be spared from her husband from killing her. “God be praised” says she after hearing that “two horsemen [are] coming”. The horsemen, (her brothers) - “one a dragoon, the other a musqueteer” - come and drive a sword through her villainous husband who has the blue beard. The blue beard theme is also present in Carter’s story, where the Marquis also has a blue beard. The blue beard symbolises the coldness of the two men, if someone is told ‘he has a heart as cold as ice’ the colour blue immediately springs to mind and Carter carries on this theme to portray this coldness.
Another major difference from the original Bluebeard tale in the Carter take is that the woman has a stronger role than the man. This is true in all of Carter’s stories who does away with the normal conventions that all females are weak and need males to save them. In Carter’s story the saviour of the young girl is in fact her mother who comes exactly on time to save her daughter from getting beheaded. The mother right from the beginning is revealed to be a woman of immense courage who has “shot a man-eating tiger with her own hand before she was older than I” the narrator tells us. This is a sharp contrast from the “Bluebeard” tale where “…immediately enter’d two horsemen, who drawing their swords ran directly to the blue beard. He knew them to be his wife’s brothers…they ran their swords through him and left him dead”
People can look at fairy tales in different ways. They can have their own opinions on symbolism and metaphors. But a person who takes them literally does not really understand the meaning of a fairy tale at all. Questions like ‘why did he give her the key?’ arise which defeat the purpose of what the story was intended for. This story (the Bloody Chamber) is intended for a more mature audience and not children but if a child was to read it, he or she would get the message rather differently even if he/she didn’t quite understand the metaphorical language or the use of symbolism and this is ‘not to betray your husband because the consequences shall be dire’ – the theme that is common in both tales.
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Quality of writing
Spelling and grammar are both excellent. However, expectations for academic essays involve a degree of formality; sometimes the writer uses colloquialisms and idioms which make the essay seem more informal and less credible as a formal consideration of the question. Phrases such as “in a nutshell” and the use of “pretty” as a synonym for “quite” could be replaced by “essentially”, or an evaluative “to a large extent”, respectively.
Level of analysis
There is a good consideration of themes, imagery and other stylistic devices, which are generally supported by quotes. This could be extended by analysis of individual words. For instance, the writer uses the quote “perhaps, here, in his subterranean privacy, I might find a little of his soul..." to suggest the heroine's insatiable curiosity and thus inherently different from traditional fairy tales. However, this quote could be interpreted in different ways: the words “subterranean privacy” hint at the liminality of the Marquis' personality, as the heroine has to physically delve into new territories (“subterranean” literally meaning 'under the ground') to find out what lies beneath his superficial exterior. From this alternative analysis, evaluation is more natural: which of these interpretations are most likely? Do these words reflect more on the character of the Marquis or the heroine? Different viewpoints are considered more generally, such as religious and feminist perspectives. This is good as it signals a consideration of ambiguities and more than one view. This is shown excellently in the conclusion, where the writer explicitly compares how different readers would interpret the tales, and how this links to the initial question of the essay. The last line of the essay is particularly strong, as it directly compares fairy tales and Carter, linking back to the essay question. This gives the essay a sense of completion and generally satisfies the reader that the writer has come to an overall conclusion without merely making a summary of points made.
Response to question
The writer does extremely well in first considering what the conventions of traditional fairy tales are, and then comparing these to 'The Bloody Chamber'. Each paragraph analysing Carter's tales always links back to the focus point of the Bluebeard story. These explicit references show an examiner that the writer is continually aware of what the question is asking. Paragraphs are structured well with topic sentences, which clearly signpost to a reader what each section is about.