The Engagement Necklace

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 “The Engagement Necklace”

Main Character: An old person

Minor Character: A waiter or waitress

Setting: Today and a diner

Surprise element: A shell

“What can I get you, Honey,” the waitress asked the old man sitting in the booth at the local diner.  The old man replied, “I have not much of an appetite.  I am too pained to eat.  I have been thinking about the past.”  “What’s wrong,” she asked, noticing he had a somber appearance upon the lineaments of his face.  “I lost my best friend,” he replied, “and the funeral was today.  I could not bear to go.  I could not say my last goodbye to her.”

To her?  Who is “her?”  The waitress finally realized whom he had meant.  “Sir, I am so sorry that you lost your wife.  Truly and deeply I am.  I could not bear such a terrible loss.”  “Well, it is just the past now, right?  I need to move on and pull myself together and deal with reality,” he said.  When he said this, he began to rub a shell on a necklace.  The necklace was brilliant in appearance and it looked as though it was handmade.  He looked down upon it and it seemed that he was about to cry.

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The waitress noticed how the shell had made his eyes look glassy, so she asked him if there was anything she could do.  The man said, “Well, if you would not mind taking a break, will you stay and talk with me?  I just need to someone to talk to right now.”  “No problem,” she answered, and sat down across from the man.  The two began to talk.

“What was your wife’s name,” the waitress asked.  “Heidi.  Her name was Heidi,” he answered.  “She was the most gorgeous woman in the world.  Her smile was so luminous; it ...

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