To what extent and in what ways is Fitzgerald purely critical of Gatsby's dreams?

Whichever way it is viewed however, I think in both situations we still have sympathy for Gatsby when his reality doesn’t quite live up to the vision. When Fitzgerald comments that “no amount of fire or freshness can challenge what a man can store up in his ghostly heart”, I think that he is making the quite depressing point here that dreams will always disappoint in the end because reality can never live up to what you can dream of. This is quite a negative view of the outcome of dreams but is perhaps not entirely critical of the idea of having dreams and something to strive for in the first place. Although it may appear that Fitzgerald is condemning dreaming, I actually believe that in this case he may be more positive about it than it seems at first. The character of Gatsby is portrayed as a dreamer, and these aims and human feelings which he possesses ensure that he is much more of an attractive character than for example, Jordan, who has no such dreams or ambitions for the future and is often associated with words such as “lazy” and “cool”. This makes her seem a lot less human than Gatsby and we empathise with him far more, which I think Fitzgerald wants us to do. This suggests that Fitzgerald is supportive of ‘the dreamer’ and tells us that he is not opposed to the idea of dreams in general. In fact he associates the illusion with the phrase “colossal vitality” which again evokes the idea that dreams are linked with the essence of being human and that Fitzgerald views Gatsby’s dreams with something other than pure criticism.

One of the main criticisms which Fitzgerald does have of Gatsby’s dreams is the materialism inherent with them. To gain Daisy’s affections, Gatsby accumulates extortionate wealth and belongings to attract her, and Daisy herself represents something of the materialistic upper class which Gatsby strives to become a part of. This is very concisely put when Gatsby says of Daisy “her voice is full of money”. Daisy’s voice has particular prominence as a motif throughout the book but at this point it is almost a leit motif as it gains meaning. All we can judge Daisy by is her voice, we never know her thoughts or what she is really thinking as what she says is usually quite empty. By saying that her voice is full of money, Gatsby is pinpointing that superficial charm which she has and perhaps even that in being entranced by her voice he has actually fallen for her wealth. This is an extremely critical way of looking at Gatsby’s feelings and we probably don’t want to believe it of him, but I think we can see it very clearly in Daisy, especially when she sees his Gatsby’s house for the first time. In her exclamation of “that huge place there?” and her reaction to the extravagant wardrobe, we can see that Fitzgerald is showing Daisy as well as Gatsby to be very focussed on the material and the possessions. I think that this is a point Fitzgerald wants to make on the subject of ‘The American Dream’, of which Gatsby’s own dream is quite symbolic. As Americans, the characters would have been brought up to believe that they could strive to achieve anything and, in short, that nothing was out of their reach. Fitzgerald is not only questioning the belief in this, but also the means of getting to it and is making a point about how society has taken this dream to be something materialistic and to do with what you can own, rather than more spiritual or meaningful dreams. In respects to materialism I think that Fitzgerald is almost purely critical of Gatsby, as what he appears to be searching for is not just Daisy but the entire social and economical class which she represents.

Another interesting way in which Fitzgerald portrays Gatsby’s dreams is by making Daisy seem quite an unworthy person to long for. Although, as said in the previous paragraph, she is superficially very beautiful and rich, there appears to be very little under the surface and she tends to talk in quite empty and fantastical phrases such as “I’d like to just get one of those pink clouds and put you in it and push you around.” In that case Fitzgerald’s alliteration of ‘pink’, ‘put’ and ‘push’, as well as the polysyndeton, make her phrasing seem childish and simple – not really that of someone who could be relied on for a long lasting relationship. In some ways we may think that Fitzgerald is criticising Gatsby’s dreams at this point, after all it seems worthless that he would have spent all this time loving someone who is in fact not worth it at all. This is incredibly clear to us after we see Daisy’s awful behaviour after the accident when she drives away without stopping, and in a way we can see her treatment of Gatsby as quite similar to this, driving along with him, leaving destruction in her wake and escaping away as fast as she can. In this way Fitzgerald is being very critical and it could seem as if his message is that no matter how much you love someone and dream about them, they could just as easily let you down and run away. I think that there is also a slight positive side to Fitzgerald’s choice of making Daisy an unworthy dream, as it shows that everybody can be loved by someone, however this is not very strong as Gatsby does not love Daisy with her faults, and rather it seems that he is just immune to seeing her flaws. Fitzgerald in fact, is probably somewhere in between these views; he is not directly attacking dreams or even Gatsby’s dreams, but he is more in this case attacking Daisy’s character. Although it may be a large lack of judgement skills on Gatsby’s side, we cannot blame him entirely and again we still feel sorry for him when Daisy does eventually let him down.

Overall I think that it is clear that there is a strong sense of ambiguity when it comes to Fitzgerald’s attitude to Gatsby’s dreams. However, I feel that the main point he wishes to make is that there is nothing wrong with dreaming, you just have to be careful when choosing your dreams that what you are longing for is actually worthwhile and won’t end up hurting you more than it can make you happy. In Gatsby’s case his aim appears to be more to make us feel sorry that he was so misguided in his choice of dream, rather than to berate him for dreaming at all.