To what extent does Iago contribute to the tragedy of Othello?

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To what extent does Iago n contribute to the tragedy of Othello?

Joe Stanford

        Iago explains in Act 1, Scene 3, how ‘Virtue’ is ‘A fig!’ and ‘’Tis in ourselves that we are thus, or thus’; he believes how ‘Our bodies are gardens’ and ‘our wills are gardeners’. This demonstrates Iago’s profound understanding of human nature, and his belief that one’s ‘will’ or strength of character is a powerful tool to control oneself.

        Iago uses his knowledge of ‘will’ advantageously; using it to manipulate characters’ minds. Underpinning his manipulation lies what Coleridge cited as ‘motiveless malignity’, yet one might say his chief motives are clear. In Act 1, Scene 1, Iago is angered by Othello ‘already cho[osing] [his] officer’, Michael Cassio. Iago failed to attain the promotion, especially by a man who has ‘never set a squadron in the field’ of war.  Not only does Iago strive for the position of lieutenant, but Cassio’s advancement renders a hatred for Cassio. It is revealed in Act 5, Scene 1, that Cassio owns ‘a daily beauty…which makes me [Iago] ugly’. Another motive charged by jealousy. In Act 1, Scene 3, Iago states ‘I hate the Moor’ as he believes Othello has slept with Emilia – ‘done my office’. This motive reinforces Coleridge’s view of ‘motiveless malignity’ for Iago ‘know[s] not if’t be true’.  Seemingly, however, Iago has a drive fuelled by jealousy and greed.

Iago’s witty, strong orchestration of events conveys a sense of the formidabile to the audience. Iago’s masterful handling renders further hatred from the audience; the heroic qualities of wit and subtlety attributed to a deceiving villain. The pivotal Act III, Scene iii, explores Iago’s orchestration, and how Othello descends into madness; from love to jealousy. This is the result of Iago’s manipulation and the seeding of unbecoming ideas into Othello’s mind.  When Cassio exits in Act III, Scene iii, Iago abruptly shouts ‘Ha! I like not that’ which sparks curiosity in Othello – this is evident from his questioning. Iago first seeds the idea of Cassio’s impropriety through describing Cassio’s exit as ‘guilty-like’. Iago’s manipulation ranges in magnitude: in Act II, Scene iii, Iago ‘cannot think it’ Cassio; whereas in Act IV, Scene I, Iago candidly states how Cassio had lain ‘with her [or] on her’. Othello now viewing Iago as a source of insight into the affair builds a certain trust for Iago, rendered by Othello’s insecurities or lack of knowledge. This making Iago’s manipulation affect stronger upon Othello.

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        Throughout Othello, Iago tries to reinforce, or play, his deceptive ‘innocent’ persona. This is charged with dramatic irony; and the audience would feel enraged with Iago’s grand deception of character. Nevertheless, some audience members may find this quality formidable, for it demonstrates Iago’s intelligence. Iago assumes this persona to his advantage. In Act V, Scene i, Iago decides to ‘bind [Cassio’s wound] with [his] shirt’ – ironically after he was Roderigo’s commander to pursue Cassio. Iago’s innocence and trustworthy nature contribute to the tragedy of Othello for they allow events to unfold, and thus more events to be engendered.  Iago’s ...

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This essay has an okay structure. The introduction does little to offer a definition of tragedy or pose a convincing argument, and the conclusion seems jumbled. I liked how Aristotle was included, with his views of catharsis being significant. However, I feel that this is not placed correctly in the conclusion. These should be pivotal to the argument, looking at how Othello arguably has no hamartia if it weren't for Iago engineering his downfall. By placing them at the argument, they seem as an afterthought rather than being weaved into the analysis. Similarly with the reference to the Jacobean audience. It's important that you don't make comments about context after the analysis, but rather integrate it. For example "the audience would probably brand more fault upon Iago for his Satanist, black nature." would be relevant when discussing the hellish imagery, but it is out of place in the conclusion. The style here is good, and it reads very well. Spelling, punctuation and grammar are great.

The analysis here is good. The paragraph discussing deception is great, looking at the dramatic device of soliloquies and how Shakespeare manipulates these to show Iago's power. There are plenty of points in this one paragraph which could be padded out to make a coherent argument, meaning the weaker points can be removed. If I were writing this essay, I would dedicate a whole paragraph to Iago's soliloquies foreshadowing and engineering Othello's downfall. The hellish imagery can be expanded upon to mention satan and the connotations of Iago as a devil. The point about Othello causing his own downfall is interesting, as I feel Shakespeare presents no internal conflict in him, and this is evident through his lack of soliloquies. Some of the points aren't strong enough to have a convincing argument, and this is often through the lack of evidence when assertions are made. For example "Perhaps Othello is more to blame" is not convincing with no evidence. Language needs to be closely analysed more here, and looking at how Shakespeare has Othello's language mimic that of Iago's later in the play is a great way to discuss this. The analytical ability is present here, it just needs to be more focused on the question for examiners to give credit.

This essay responds averagely to the task. Despite looking at Iago's presentation as a villain, which is strong here, there is little argument surrounding Iago's influence on Othello's tragedy. I would recommend with a question like this to define tragedy. This can be Aristotle's views, Stoppard's or any other viewpoint which works to fit your argument, but it is essential you have a sharp focus. I have read many Examiners' Reports at A-Level, and the biggest downfall for English Literature coursework and exams is the lack of focus and clarity of argument. Paragraphs starting "Venetian society has a certain attitude towards women" seem to have little relevance to the question, and so this focus is not evident here. There are times where this essay switches arguments, saying that Shakespeare's technique "removes Iago from the tragedy". You cannot sit on the fence at A-Level, and whilst there may be points which disregard your argument, it is better to acknowledge them and explain why they are weaker than to give them equal consideration.