World War one poetry - Anthem for Doomed Youth'

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WORLD WAR ONE POETRY

“Bent doubled like old beggars under sacks” was the first simile in the poem, Owen said this to give the impression that they were all very tired and their posture was very slouched. They were walking like beggars ‘under’ sacks. This made out that the soldiers were bent down so much that the bags were on top of them and not hung on their backs.

“Coughing like hags” gave me the very good image of what the soldiers’ state was, Owen uses a lot of similes in this poem and uses them well to describe the whole feel of the setting.

When the gas shells hit and the one man couldn’t get his gas mask on in time he used a simile to describe the movement of the man who was dying. “Like a man in fire or lime” I imagined that the man was running around jerking his arms around as if he was on fire. In the first stanza Owen really tried to make out that these men weren’t exited and happy to go to war they were in a terrible state and needed rest.

The second stanza focused on the soldiers trying to get the ‘clumsy’ gas masks on just in time, but one man didn’t get his on in time and the gas took over his body. Owen described him to be ‘under a green sea’. He was describing the way the mist moved as if under a sea. In this stanza, Owen begins with “Gas, Gas. Quick boys”. This is a narrative technique that not only shows the urgency of the scene, it takes our attention away from the soldiers, to action on the battlefield.

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The third stanza focused on the man who had been hit by the gas being dragged along on a cart and the other soldiers following behind him. Watching him die. This was the part of the poem that Owen really wanted to shock people with. Phrases like “obscene as cancer, bitter as the cud”. The phrase “His hanging face, like a devils sick of sin” was to give an image of the expression on his face, a disgusting type of wretched look. “Such high zest” meant with such high spirits that it was good to give your life for ...

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