Write about the ways writers aim to make the beginning of their texts exciting- The Rime of the Ancient Mariner

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LYDIA GEORGE

Write about the ways writers aim to make the beginning of their texts exciting.

The Rime of the Ancient Mariner

The opening of The Rime of Ancient Mariner starts with archaic language and description with a fast paced rhythm as the Mariner ceases a guest from going to a wedding. There is no introduction to the Mariner, his purpose of being there, what he is doing and of whom he is there for, this adds an anonymous aspect to his character which automatically intrigues the reader. You learn about the Mariner’s appearance through the wedding guest which he grasps with his ‘skinny hand’ as he demands to be released, he refers to the Marnier as a ‘grey-beard loon’. This gives the Mariner an unusual guise and makes the reader question as to why such a man might be at the sort of event. The word ‘loon’ gives the Mariner an inhuman quality is presented as being quite disturbed, this foreshadows some of his actions in events further on in the ballad as well as adding to the complicity of his character.

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In the opening there is already conflict in the ballad, between the Mariner and the wedding guest as the Mariner physically and psychically retainers the guest from joining the party. The Mariner ‘holds him  (the wedding guest) with his glittering eye’ this makes the Mariner have a great presence and  seem as if he has power to put the guest into some sort of trance. The wedding guest also listens with intent as the Mariner begins his story – ‘listens like a three years’ child’ even though the guest had been so persistent on joining the wedding.  This concept adds ...

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