AS History Essay on Patronage and corruption in Elizabethan government

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AS History – Essay on Patronage and corruption in Elizabethan government

Question: Use Sources B, C and your own knowledge. Do you agree with the view that the Elizabethan system of government was both corrupt and inefficient? (40 marks)

The English government in the 16th century lead and promoted by Queen Elizabeth operated with a system of political patronage and grants of monopoly. These methods were used to organize the governing class as the Queen lacked a civil service, local officials and an army which would allow her to enforce her will; thus Elizabeth had to reward the governing class for her to secure the throne. However, it can be argued that the system was both corrupted and inefficient; many believe Elizabeth’s regime was marked with cheating, bribery and unjust practices and that it did not operate effectively. On the other hand, it was argued that the system was indeed one of high quality by standards of the historical age; especially when compared to other Western European countries at the time.  We also shouldn’t judge the operation of Elizabethan’s government by our modern standards.

Source B is a letter dated back in 1595 from the Dean of Durham to Lord Burghley thanking him for his promotion to bishopric. The letter is filled with flattering and obsequious language such as descriptions of Burghley being an “especial patron to see”, and that he “now pleased God and Her Majesty” with the “extraordinary furtherance”. Such a use of language suggests some degree of corruption as the Dean of Durham only got the position because of his pleasing attitude to Lord Burghley and that he isn’t the best man for the job. There is also potential for inefficiency as Dean of Durham might not be a good bishop but only one which “sucks up” to Lord Burghley.  Furthermore, the Dean of Durham said he is “unworthy” of the job; this shows that even he himself does not believe he will do a good job or he is trying to flatter Burghley by degrading himself. The Dean of Durham is also offering to repay his promotion by “presenting your Lordship with a hundred pounds in gold”.  This suggests corruption as the Dean of Durham is paying to buy the position and he only got the promotion because of his wealth; not ability. It shows that the system is inefficient as it allows such actions. Surely, if the Dean of Durham felt that he deserves the position; there will be no need for the gold.

On the other hand, the arguments above can be countered. Firstly, the letter is of a friendly and excited tone thus we can see that the two men share a good relationship; which means they will work well together. The Dean of Durham also looks as if he is passionate and ready for the position suggesting he will be efficient with doing his job.  As for the giving of the gold; there is no evidence stating Lord Burghley ever asked for and accepted the gold; therefore it is not corruption as there has been no deal between the two prior the promotion. From my knowledge of language, formality and customs of the 16th century, the flattering language can simply be seen as a sign of appreciation and is no more than politeness. The gold giving is no more than a custom of thanking for the promotion; thus, corruption did not occur. I also understand that Lord Burghley was a honest, trusted and highly respected figure and is arguably Elizabeth’s favorite; thus there is no need and no reason for him to be bribed with a hundred pound of gold.

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Source C criticizes Elizabethan’s government for showing “certain defects”, referring to the system being faulty in that it hands too much power to too few. Wallace MacCaffrey also suggests that the system “lacked adequate safeguards” which shows that there is little order putting the question of efficiency into doubt. As a result, Lord Burghley had to “ceaselessly supervise” to stop the “worst abuses”. This suggests that politicians were corrupted as they lacked self discipline; more worrying, “protection waned with the ageing statesman’s health and strength”.   The fact that the system was so dependent on one man shows inefficiency; there ...

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