To what extent was the Treaty of Versailles harsh and short-sighted?

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Caroline Sims

To what extent was the Treaty of Versailles harsh and short-sighted?

The peace treaties of 1919, were an attempt to come to an agreement with the losing powers that they accept their blame and peace would be resolved while they pay the consequences. As Germany was a losing power of the war, she was made to sign the treaties and accept their consequences. This essay will examine the extent to which the Treaty of Versailles was harsh and short-sighted.

 I will begin with the reasons why the Treaty of Versailles can be justified. Firstly, there were three victorious powers who negotiated the peace treaties; David Lloyd George, for Britain, Woodrow Wilson, for America, and George Clemenceau, for France. The French suffered the most war damage, with the most brutal battles being fort there, including thousands of square miles of trenches dug up and 1.5 million casualties. Therefore, George Clemenceau opted for a considerably higher amount of reparations than the other two winning powers. However this was compromised and ended up at 6.6million, which was substantially lower than Clemenceau’s original proposal. Furthermore, as stated by historian William Carr in ‘A History of Germany’, ‘if Clemenceau had his way, the Rhineland would have become an independent State, the Saarland would have been annexed to France and Danzig would have become an integral part of Poland’. Given that Britain and America restrained Clemenceaus’ proposals, it is arguable that Germany got off lightly. If Clemenceau’s visions had been accepted, Germany would have been in a much worse situation than she ended up in, therefore, it is debatable that the Treaty of Versailles was justified.

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Moreover, agreeing with the above point, is what modern historians have noticed: that the terms of the Treaty were ‘relatively lenient’. For example, looking at the statistics concluded by modern historian Henig, we see that ‘It deprived her of about 13.5% of her territory, 13% of her economic productivity and about 7 million [or 10%] of her inhabitants’. Therefore, this extends my above point that ‘the Allies could have dealt Germany much harsher blows’. This leads me on to my next reason for justifying the Treaty, which was that the Allies begun to insufficiently implement the Treaty, thus making ...

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This is a well balanced essay that stays focused on the question asked and uses a good range of available historiography. At times, the author's ideas get lost compared to those of historians. Ensure these are always the driving force of an essay. 4 out of 5 stars.