Which formal document is the best and why

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Which document is the best and why?

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I contrasted two letters from two different companies. The first letter I analysed was from ‘Sharkey’s Hardware’ and the second letter was from ‘David Silver Spares’. These two companies differ greatly in many ways including; size, location and genre of products. As a result of these immense differentiations they operate in a completely different way.

Sharkey’s hardware is a very small family owned DIY store located in Newtownbutler, Co. Fermanagh. Although he is operating on a small scale he still sends out formal letters to his customers.

The letter I received from Sharkey’s hardware is very professional and looks very formal. It is word processed and incorporates headed paper containing a logo. All the relevant details are contained in the letter head and all the information is easy to understand due to its size. The letter includes my address, date, and message and has been signed by the proprietor. This letter gets straight to the point is very easy to understand and well spaced. This letter also looks very authentic as it has the letterhead and is signed. Clearly Sharkey’s a small firm has spent lots of time creating this letter and preparing the headed paper.  The letter is printed on plain white A4 paper and is printed in B&W.

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However this letter is still very basic compared with the other letter I received from David Silver Spares.

The letter I received from David Silver Spares is much more advanced as expected due to the size of this company. This company has a much wider market and probably sends out hundreds of letters every day. Corporate image therefore is very important to this company whereas it is not such an important factor for Sharkey’s hardware. Clearly money and time has been spent preparing the template for this letter and the actual contents. There is a letterhead printed ...

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