AS French Essay. Nous avons vu la publicit dans un journal pendant que nous vivions un an en France disant que vous cherchiez une famille
Bonjour,
Nous avons vu la publicité dans un journal pendant que nous vivions un an en France disant que vous cherchiez une famille ayant une expérience de vie « originale », et nous pensons que nous sommes une famille appropriés pour votre tournage pour de diverses raisons.
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This is a 3 star piece of work. The writer has a reasonable grasp of French, and writes quite accurately. There is a variety of structures and vocabulary and ideas are mostly clearly expressed. The structure of the letter is sound. In order to improve this piece of work, the writer needs to make sure that ideas are clear and the sentences make sense. Too often the writer adopts English word order and tries to translate the English sentence directly into French. This doesn't always work, and the sentence becomes muddled up. It is always useful to have a good French dictionary and grammar book whilst writing.