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This is a 5 star piece of work. It is extremely well-written, well-researched and is very accurate. The writer demonstrates an excellent knowledge of the film and answers the questions clearly and uses quotes and scenes to demonstrate and support their ideas. There is a wide variety of complex structures, topic-specific vocabulary, and conjunctions. The ideas are clearly expressed. In order to improve this piece of work, care should be taken when using French verbs and prepositions, as sometimes they can be different. The writer could use more 'si' clauses in different tenses, in order to demonstrate knowledge of different tenses such as the conditional.