La tele – bonne ou mauvais influence
Je pense que la television est un moyen exceptionnel d’information. Il y a beaucoup des documentaires qui ont valeur educative. Aussi le tele est une bonne source pour les questions d’actualite. Quelques personnes pense que la television est le sommeil de l’esprit. Elle nous habitue a la passivite. Si on a fatiguant c’est plus facile de reste avant la television que lis une livre.
Je pense que le plus on est cultive le moin on parle de la television parce qu’on a les loisirs qui sont plus interresant. Aussi si tu es intellegent tu n’aime pas la plupart de television qui est la television poubelle.
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